What an amazing and rather chilling short. You have an awesome talent.

I really enjoyed your strange but true story. Children are fun at any age but it's funny to hear what they think and the surprising things they say back to you are certainly memorable.

I liked this story about being six. Life is simple for Team 7, yet at the same time not truly simple. The have some understanding, but not a lot which just about sums up how frustrating and wonderful it can be to be 6.

I enjoyed this piece. You successfully sum up the year of being 6 for 3 different individuals in an impressive short 3 paragraph piece. Thanks for sharing.

Naruto's made me smile, Sasuke's made that smile fade and was replaced with a sad look, and Sakura's made a shiver go up my spine. Truly lovely work.

Oh, and that six-year-old you talked to? I instantly loved him. But I have this nagging feeling that you were talking to me little nephew... He can be such a hand full sometimes, but he has such a smartass way with everything that it's hard not to love him. Keep up the great, no fantastic work!

Midnight

Wow...kudos to that six-year-old you talked to...he's got one heck of a personality. ^_^

Amazing fic too. It was short, but really effective.

Naruto's was perfect. Fit his personality to a T.

Sasuke's made my heart wrench; it really did. Perfect for him though...

Sakura's was a little scary, creepy even... Six years old and already schooling her face like that, albeit unconsiously...(*chills*)

Altogether a truly awesome fic! Nice work with this.

Definitely kudos to the little kid you talked to. Very admirable young man. x3

I like the short portraying of the characters you gave too. Very insightful and very masterfully done. I adored it, definitely.

That was surprisingly deep and complete feeling for such a short one-shot. I was trying to figure out how something so short would be violent. That was REALLY good - great job!

This is so cute! ^-^ I use to be a nanny and I use to talk with the kids like adults, it made them feel more important. It is funny though, to see their reactions by how you speak with them. They can be smart, yet some are not so clever.

Alot of readers on thios sight are not looking for serious works of liturature. You could write some beautiful metaphor, or use somethign simple to replerent a life story, and no one will notice. They'll see it as simple and call it imature. But, i read to read things and find meanings, and sometimes I find them, but, sometimes i don't. Very nice. Simplicity is often the most complex aspect of writing. I like Naruto's the best. Sasuke's is perfect though, and Sakura's is truelly lovely. Well done.

Beautiful and wonderfully done. I love the contrasts in their lives as well as the matter of fact way it is shown. Fantastic fic!