great job

Wow! Yes, it would have definitely happened like this. Great story! You're a talented writer.

Another wonderful alternate reality story. Nice take on the story.

Awesome, yet again! Love how you write Angela, at first, so helpless; then becoming the cold ** she is now. Kinda makes me feel bad for her, until I remember all the manipulating she's done! I also like how Angela can dream the future, yet she wants a more protective power.