I cried!! You big meanie, how you torture Severus so...Brill, but cruel.

Alex

I normally don't like Snape/harry, and I do believe that's what this was... but I liked this. :)

He's grieving so much. Here's hoping there are some who will comfort him for Harry's death, and not blame him for it somehow.

I love this little piece.

I especially love how Severus' mentioning of the negative spaces are that which brings home the grief and he equates the missing indention of the footprints to his heart missing his lover.

Love it.

*sniffle* so beautifully sad *sniffle*

Damn, why do you always make me cry?

Very nice

I loved it

Lauren

egads... I cried the entire time...

so deep and that last line was tops!! i find the pairing wrong but thats just me, but over all it was beautiful and intense!! loved it!

You... and FoolishWishmaker are the only slashers I like. Good story.

And this:

"Closing his eyes, Severus thought for a moment of how it was the negative spaces that hurt the most: the indentation in a pillow, the sag of the settee where someone had sat, the empty chair across the table, the cold left side of his bed. All reminders that someone who'd once been there had gone…."

is so true. So sad.

P.S. If I was you, I would enable anonymous reviews :)

Intensely creative and mesmerizing. :] It's incomplete, yet complete in the sense that you've said all you needed to say.