OH MAN

THE DOOR

WAS UNLOCKED

I'm still geekin' out about it.

Forgot this actually exsisted... And forgot how much I LOVED IT! Please update soon. I'm missing this fanfiction. LL

I read through this, and I have a few questions (if I can remember them).

1) Is Lark actually Cyclonis in this "story"? not like, who she is inside and all, but her appearence and so on...

2) I think it was the 3rd or so Chapter, but did Finn actually see what Piper and Lark were getting up to?

3) Why was Aerrow and Piper so shocked to see Lark the 2nd time as a Male when they just saw her as one? a greater appearence change?

4) Most likely seems as if this is a sequel to another Story; if so, which one? so I can get a better understanding (sorry for my lack of knowledge, I've probably read it before but it slipped my mind).

Also, I'd like to praise the great deal of work you've put into this. It isn't mindless, nor is it to serious. I was not expecting to read what I found in the new few Chapters after the first. Being a guy who isn't interested in Sex (yes, weird isn't it; but I cannot stand to see what it does to people, and how it consumes the mind of our young Teenage Society) it was quite weird to read, ESPECIALLY it being about Piper... Now, if I watch the Show again it's going to pop-up in my mind everytime I see her rofl.

Sorry if this is a very, very late Post... It seems as if everyone else posted a year ago. It would be good if those were answered, thankyou.

wow...stork is super perceptive...

i love this story, and its prequel. you did a great job!

Fluff indeed, but good fluff. At least you... ahem... elaborated on why she was acting the way she did.

Hehe, fluff is always nice. I always thought Finn would enjoy being "admired" by someone else for once.

Beggars can't be choosers, Finland... ;)

canu rite more chapters or a sequel? this is iinteresting

Hehe! Hehe, Moromete! Plot thickening? I'm sure it's nothing.

The plot... she continues to thicken. o_O

Man-Lark is an incredibly amusing mental image. 'Nuff said.

You really like that word, "elaborate", don't you?

Ah, Lark. Manipulative even in, uh, semi-reincarnation.

On a side note, I always thought Piper's shirt just extended toward her pants without becoming a skirt in itself. At least, that's how it's depicted in the "Piper layer" drawn by one of the show's artists (skyknightnd).

Oh, look, a shout-out! Haha, very comedic! You think you are so clever with that, don't you? My opinion, expressed swiftly in my last review, still stands, however, and despite your writing a half-page chapter just for it, I will NOT elaborate!

Ahahaha, Finn. AHAHAHAHAHA!

Ah, but must you torture Finn so? I suppose, being in the name of romance, such things are to be expected... D

lol XD poor Finn

cant wait for the next update ;)