I really like this story! I can see this as actual dialogue that would be in JTHM! Oooh I reallyhope you continue, I'm really curious as to how this all plays out!

Its always nice to see Johnny in his element.

yeah...

thank you so much...i laughed hard...

I've got a funny feeling Mitsuki won't like Johnny's "method of reliving stress" when she does eventually come across it.

more please...and don't wait too long to update or i'll die of boredom..

Neat!

more, more, more,...that is all you seem to be sick alot, it's okay i am too.

i love it,please update!

CONTINUE! PLEAASE!

hmm... i defently consider you tell more. and im sure as anyone else that liked it. i had a idia of a sotry that was MUCH like this. brown-haird angel falling in love with nny. never finished the 2nd chapter though. im bad with finishing things i guess. but i beg of you too at leaste finish it for the sake of... pizza?

Hiya!

First I'd like to say that I think you're very brave uploading on . Not everybody does that. (I still haven't mustrered up the courage to do it!) So I thought I'd leave you a review. I have to say that the whole "Johnny meets a girl" feels a bit over done (but if that is the setting you want than DO NOT let that stop you). I think your grammar is ok and structure as well. But I have to say that I'm not really sure if I think that Johnny is IC. (He might be though, I mean Johnny is crazy, he does weird stuff all the time)but be careful on how social he is and all the 'touching people-thing'. He is a VERY difficult character to get in touch with (for OCs) and even harder to make him fall in love (since his greatest show if love is murder, so I can understand why you let him ask your character home, but just be careful with that stuff, kay? This is ONLY MY OPINION. You're as free as a bird! :-)

Not a whole lot happened to review on, but you forgot to capitalize.

Don't worry i stick with this one as I find it rather interesting. As far as keeping Johnny in character you have my greatist simpathies I tried it once and failed horribly.

great story you got here! i'd love to read more if it continues! hope to see chapter 4 l8r on! BYE! P