|Reviews for First Time|
| quarterdark 4/6/10 . chapter 1
| Watermelon Kiss 3/31/10 . chapter 1
I love this. And I disagree with you when you say you need to write more mature stuff; although a kiss is the only lovey-dovey thing you have here, it's so... sensual. Without being over the top with the details.
Love this so much.
| ChasingProse 5/21/09 . chapter 1
Great. But decidedly not a K.
| moonlight ookami 3/29/09 . chapter 1
oh boy,that was hot.
| Miss Hydrangea 3/10/09 . chapter 1
Perhaps it should be rated a bit higher than K? It seemed to be sensual and charged, despite there only having been a kiss. Haha, I suppose it's a talent, to infuse a kiss with such sensuality, without needing to describe all the slobbery details.
| Sparkling Silver Moon 3/6/09 . chapter 1
Awwh, this is so cute :]
& it leaves it open to so much more! Haha, damn. Kakashi totally liked it, hehe :)
This storry made me all giggly. :D
| almost-moon 1/16/09 . chapter 1
You know, I usually hate KakashiSakura pairings, but... i like it x] OK, I really liked it, haha
Short and sweet and like the other comment, I also love Kakashi's hesitance
Kudos xx ]
| lll 1/12/09 . chapter 1
Oh my god, this is so, so perfect! I LOVE it! Especially Kakashi's hesitance, lol.