awesome :)

I love this. And I disagree with you when you say you need to write more mature stuff; although a kiss is the only lovey-dovey thing you have here, it's so... sensual. Without being over the top with the details.

Love this so much.

Great. But decidedly not a K.

oh boy,that was hot.

Perhaps it should be rated a bit higher than K? It seemed to be sensual and charged, despite there only having been a kiss. Haha, I suppose it's a talent, to infuse a kiss with such sensuality, without needing to describe all the slobbery details.

Awwh, this is so cute :]

& it leaves it open to so much more! Haha, damn. Kakashi totally liked it, hehe :)

This storry made me all giggly. :D

You know, I usually hate KakashiSakura pairings, but... i like it x] OK, I really liked it, haha

Short and sweet and like the other comment, I also love Kakashi's hesitance

Kudos xx ]

Oh my god, this is so, so perfect! I LOVE it! Especially Kakashi's hesitance, lol.