Lol, well, you captured Izzy and Paul very well.
I can't really imagine the other characters doing what you'd written (Susan egging Sky on, etc), but it did make for some humour. I can't really tell whether this is meant to be humorous, or serious.
But either way, thanks for posting! Can't wait to see what happens next!
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Izzy's back.
You rock already!
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PMS!
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