Absolutely amassing :)

My wife sent me this link. I must say I really enjoyed it. Great work!

wish it was longer,but really loved it

An amazing story!

i love you story!

TOTALLY LOVE IT! it actually felt like a long story already considering it only has 5 chapters! seriously youre an awesome writer, xperimental!

aww this is so sad! i love the last sentence!

haha this was so cool :) x

awesomee story:) ended too soon lol

I have to admit, when I finished reading the first chapter, I was iffy about the plot, to say the least. Any doubt promptly ended by the end of the second chapter. You took this wild (no pun intended) idea and made it entirely fascinating and plausible (I use that term very loosely) enough to suspend disbelief throughout the whole story. It's a shame this is only five chapters, though. It would've been an extremely epic Spashley fic if it was extended into a full-fledged story. Still amazing, though. And I liked the ending, however movie-script material it was. Flashback sequel, perhaps? ;) (Just kidding...kind of.)

loved the story. sweet and funny, just great.

Love the story, but it was too short. I really enjoyed your writing.

aww the ending was so cute! loved the way Ash said she was going to play with some old friends. Sad that it ended this soon. :( thought it would be longer though but it's ok, i liked the way it ended.

Great story hope to read more of you!

aw this story was great! your an awesome writer

Ashley trying to drown the rubber duckie was soo cute.. I can totally picture that in my head. haha and.. dry humping Spence during family night.. bwahahha.. awesome