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Reviews for: Rusted Root
Inu-Angel Z
2009-04-24 . chapter 1
This is a very well written, sweet little series of drabbles. Made me smile, actually. Thank you for sharing.
mrawgirl09
2009-02-20 . chapter 1
hmm... they're not bad... actually, some are pretty good! But really... if they're all sets of different stories, why not make it into different chapters like a drabble?
Violet Shadows
2009-01-30 . chapter 1
Pretty good, its a little short, but I don't think a story like this could be made much larger. It doesn't have enough power or length to be great, but on its own it isn't bad; all in all, good job, I can't wait to see your next piece.
Kirinin
2009-01-29 . chapter 1
D'you know, I put Ranma and Ryoga as main characters into ff-dot-net's fic-search without any other specifications, and guess what popped up? You - and me! In short, *no-one* writes this pairing.

I liked the way you separated your story into different 'tracks', and I enjoyed *Faster the Chase* particularly. It's violent and unpredictable and also it's very *Ranma* to hiss 'anything goes' before a first kiss.

I'm *glad* you're back to writing slash; and glad you decided to post this. :)

-K
MShrieken
2009-01-14 . chapter 1
aw... That's a very sweet piece of shounen ai. Kudos and cookies for you!

M
RobinRocks
2009-01-13 . chapter 1
Oh dear, no reviews yet...? I thought you might have had at least one or two by now, on both this fic and the other one... Still, I suppose the Ranma section certainly isn't as active as it used to be (like, in the late 90s...) and the Princess Tutu section was NEVER particularly active, so... don't be discouraged!

You know, I can't remember exactly what I said when I betaed this apart from "RanmaxRyoga?! For serious?!", but still... I do like it. If Ranma didn't have fifty million girls chasing after him I think he would do well with Ryoga... you know, when they aren't fighting over something idiotic. ^^

Kudos on:

One: Constantly referring to Ryoga's habit of getting hopelessly lost. Like "He doesn't have many friends - he can never find them". ^^ Good line. Although I have to say that I think the final line of the entire fic is my very favourite. :)

Two: Actually writing a kiss (more or less)!

b^^d

Although... Ranma, consistent? A guy who turns into a girl? If that's Ryoga's idea of consistent, I am kinda worried for him... O.o

Har har har... Well, I am just glad you finally posted this up! :)

RR x

P.S: ...I wrote "Ryuga" instead of "Ryoga" multiple times during this review... which is bad, since I am quite certain that Ohba and Obata swiped the name "Ryuga Hideki" from "Ryoga Hibiki"... Right? O.o
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