Normally, I am not prone to begging, but his story is just that good! So could you please, please, please continue it? The plot is awesome and has the ability to be taken on further if only you would write it, so please?

It's very interesting, and I hope you come back to it someday.
As for the Bible giving nightmares...from the time I was 9 until I had enough sense to put it down at the age of 15.

Cute.

i loved this.
you should...continue it? :)

This is very interesting, and the setting works remarkably well too.

I can only imagine Temari's "madness", having to live in a time and society in which strong women were frowned upon. I like how you alluded to that fact too. Most literary.

you have a lot of interesting character personas in this fic. I'd love to see more of it. ^.^

I loved it. And I would really like to see a continuation. I mean - there are some qustions left unanswered, like: is Temari really insane??

I really liked the contrast you brought bout between them by making Shikamaru British and Temari French.

I found a lot of it very numerous. Shikamaru's quip about the Arc de Triomphe was wonderful (and something shrewd yet detached enough for him to think).
Quite the little jab about the bible. I really do like your stories.

" The imperialism every cultured Frenchwoman inherited through some mysterious play of genetics." That just made me grin from ear to ear.

I might also mention that the idea of Kankurou spreading his arms and calling anyone 'Monsieur' is truly... special. (In the best sense.)

The only thing that I didn't like is... it''s too short! Really... Here I was, getting interested and then - the end. Cruel.. But the story was good :))

I enjoyed this. I really think it would do well with a continuation- like what happens the next day at least. Of course, it's your choice. But I liked it.

Well, well, that was definitely interesting.

that was the coolest Shikamaru and Temari story i have ever read...

that was really sweet. It was also rather unique too. I love your style of language and imagery. Simple but opening your mind. Temari was still kept in character even though she's a little bit "insane." I think that would make Shikamaru appreciate her more. I'd love this to have been a multi-chapter fic but I suppose it just wasn't meant to be. But let me assure you that you definitly have a beautiful basis to start one. Great story. Definitly a favourite

Sand-Jounin-Temari

Uh-oh, Shikamaru's thoughts betray him: 'The way she filled that nightgown!!' I liked that line. It made an already good story, even better and more memorable.

If people ever forget this story, they will always remember that line.

Keep up the good work!!

Knightewolfe

I think this would make a great full-blown story. The setting really appeals to me. I admitt to being a history buff, but I still think it could be very intruiging to anyone. But anyway, great job overall!