 LunaSphere 2009-02-12 . chapter 1Wow. I always felt there weren't enough Edel fics around, so to find one about two of the most intriguing and most neglected characters--Edel and the Oak--was refreshing and exciting. I like the premise of this and your descriptive writing--that first paragraph in particular was so vivid I felt like I could see it. In fact, I wish there were even more descriptive writing in this!
I also really liked the title--it might just be in my head, but I couldn't help feeling there was an implicit connection you were making between the musical instrument and the heart as organ (body part). That might just me XD |