I quite liked the way that you weaved your words together. In particular I loved the way you ended it. It was soft and sweet and I loved it. Good Job.

A lovely look at it all from a view that's Jareth's and yet almost outside it all. The story draws the reader into another realm, one where time is little more than a game. ; )

Your writing is very fluid and graceful, and fits perfectly with an ageless being like Jareth and a magic place like the Labyrinth. I look forward to seeing more from you.

That was beautiful.

Wow, you are an excellent writer, it was pure poetry. I loved every second of reading this.

Beautiful.

Well written, and flowing.

You kept me interested the whole way through.

Congrats on an excellent fic about the BEST film of all time (except the Dark Knight and Edward Scissorhands lol)

xx Caitlin

Lovely - quite poetic.

That was beautiful. I've read several of your Death Note stories but I didn't think you were also a Labyrinth fan (just glad I'm not the only one really XD).

I look forward to seeing more from you in either fandom.

Ciao!