Aww, that was sad :( haha I started crying.

this is really good! and sad... i cried SO hard!

Tears!

Oh man your writing affects me so much!

You made ME cry!

Let me tell you not an easy task.

xo

wow...

that was just so sad...sniffle

but it was well written and a great

one shot!

but it was just so sad!

I wish that he could've changed her and

she would be her young 17 year old self

again...that would be cool!

xoxo

i totally cried. i can't even see the keyboard in front of me :'( omgosh this was written in such a lovely way! agh! you're so talented, i don't even know what to say! this must have had you bawling in the writing process. i know i couldn't have held it in! i loved this even though it was the saddest thing i've ever read! definitely going to fave it! and i wanted you to know that this was recommended to me by a friend by the name of xoxoGossipGirl. and i fully thank her for letting me know such a wonderful piece existed! i think it goes without saying that you are very very VERY talented! just all the raw emotions that surfaced with every word i read. it was amazing! thank you so much!

My only thought right now is that I need to stop crying because I'm at work. LOLOL

Seriously, this was so beatifully heartbreakingly sad. My chest hurt through it all. Beautifully written!

Ok, so that made me cry. It's really good. I like how he still sees her as the girl he fell in love with. I like to think that's how we all see our first loves.

i cried a bit in New Moon and then again in Eclipse and Breaking Dawn...

but this.. I havent cried this much in a long long time (since watching Titanic) i was amazed at how well written it was... this really moves a person!

Well Done! Even though ive become a cryign wreak...

i was crying the entire time! D:

it was so sad...

now i think i'll always cry when i hear that song pop up on my iPod... lol.

beautiful. stunning. great one shot.

I'll admit I'm not normally a fan of one shots but you have just turned me around on that. Stunning. I'm sitting here, tears in my eyes and a lump in my throat... and I feel like writing now.

Thank you.

Well, you turned me into a pathetic blubbering fool. Even now, tears are still streaming down my face making typing next to impossible.

This was so beautifully written. The narration was poetic and the emotion almost unbearable. I am so thrilled that Edward was truly weak in the books and could not let Bella go, because this story made me realize how terribly painful it would have been to watch Bella grow old and he remains forever 17.

*wipes face* There all better! Amazing story.

Cheers!

Sabrina

This was soo sad but so sweet at the same time. I don't know who I felt bad for the most, Edward or Bella. Thinking about him staying away to let her be happy was too sad a thought but at the same time this was a really great one shot. It's always fun to consider the what ifs in a story and I like that he came back in the end. I wonder what his life will be like now that she is truly gone, will he be at peace knowing that her soul is somewhere else, or will he be able to live without her.

I liked that he went back to Forks every now and again to check in on her making sure she was happy and that things were okay but how painful that was for him, and you showed that well in his memories. I think you kept to his character quite well even though this was a totally different set of circumstances.

Your stuff always makes me cry! Im so gald he didnt leave bella for good in New Moon! I am so sad now! Now i have to go read your other story 'Anticipation' again to cheer myself up.

god

this made me so emotional..i havent gotten over it and its been hours since i read it

well done bb

oh and i bought the song on itunes

so bravo