OMG! I'm bawling in the middle of my office! That was fucking AWESOME! My heart simply hurts right now.

omg did i cry? umm no i had a river running out of my eyes and sobs coming out of my mouth i hate the stories where the main characters die but i have to read them and i always have tears but this was SO sad. Good job on the story though even if you did make me cry loved it!

This is the best short story I have ever read. This is a very unique story in the Twilight fandom and I congratulate you on its creation, well done and exceedingly bittersweet.

I was about to give one of your other stories a try when I saw this. It was soooo saaadddd. But good and it was interesting to see what might have been if Edward had really stayed away like he meant to. My hearts a little bit broken now. Thanks for writing, I'm going to check out your other works now!

Ok, that was heartbreaking. Mission accomplished.

this made me cry- it is so sad, but also in a good way- she knew he was there all the while, and then at the end, he was indeed there.

we all should be so lucky at the end.

and the simple beauty of your writing here is exquisite- not one word too many.

i cryed it is so sad and the vidio i cryed then to you are such a good righter ps i fort the last edward senn was mega sad

I finally gathered up the courage to read this story... that was great. thank you.

this was amazing *sniff*

So wonderful i cried and my heart aces I can only hope to write something so womderful some day

i am sitting in tears right now.

this one-shot is so beautiful and so touching.

thankyou!

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I should have known when I read the summary that this story was going to destroy me. I started crying almost from the beginning and had too many tears in my eyes to finish it without stopping SEVERAL times. Your writing of this story was exquisite. Thank you so much. Sandy

That is so sad! I have tears streaming down my face and I can't swallow because of this huge lump in my throat.

So sweet, though... even apart for all that time, they never stopped loving each other.

Well,there are no words.I can't pull myself together,the tears are still coming.

I know this is going to be sad.

I know this will make me cry.

Still, I want to read it and yes, it's sad, I cried.

But it's beautifully written. Thank you for writing.