 Falling Right Side-Up 2009-10-24 . chapter 14I love this fic. Kind of slow paced considering it's a remake of the movie, but still. Love it. Hope you update soon! |
 Teoryn 2009-09-26 . chapter 14Okay, I really like this one as well. Very nice twist with Eclipse not being Skyfier's daughter. Only leaves Megatron...but then it could have been someone else. Very interesting indeed. I hope you haven't lost interest in this story and maybe work on it some more.
Wonderful story. (-: |
 gogogo! 2009-09-07 . chapter 14 come and update this piece! it's a great story don't abandon it just yet!~ |
 Eliza Acheron 2009-08-02 . chapter 1 This is such a fantastic story- please update! :) |
 Shirox 2009-07-29 . chapter 14I like this story very much and that there is Sky/Star pairing in it is a big plus :D It's interesting and well written, i hope to see more of it soon :) |
 cfox 2009-07-18 . chapter 14 Well that threw me for a loop . I think I know who the other creater is and what a shock . Her color should of been the tip off. Now off to read What Darkness Brings, to find out the scoop.
Please continue to update soon.
keep up the good work. |
 9aza 2009-07-14 . chapter 14Whoa! Skyfire's not her creator?! Man, now I have to distract myself so my curiosity doesn't kill me. Great story by the way, it just keeps getting better and better. |
 Wol Lo 2009-07-13 . chapter 14Massive update!! Yay! |
 Black Demon Cat 2009-07-13 . chapter 14And the plot the thickenings. |
 KarKeys123 2009-07-13 . chapter 14(Gasps) |
 Starfire201 (not signed in) 2009-07-13 . chapter 14 You know, after I reviewed that chapter where it was shown Starscream had a daughter, I realized something and reread the section, and the coloring at that point just struck me as odd for a sparkling between Skyfire and Starscream. Not wanting to spam, I didn't post another review to that chapter with that statement. I did get suspicious, however, and have some ideas of who the other creating party is. You are good at surprises, though, so I will not voice them here in case I am incorrect.
Liked how you handled the revelations of Starscream's identity to the Autobots as well. Nicely done. Enjoyed Sideswipe's getting thrown down the most. I suspect Starscream considered that long overdue payback. |
 Starfire201 (not signed in) 2009-07-13 . chapter 12 It's only been 2 weeks, and you were able to churn out 3 chapters during that time. I would hardly call that slow, but that is my opinion. Rather amusing the meeting between the Autobots and Sector Seven. Better than the movie one. |
 PhantasmBabeIvory 2009-07-13 . chapter 14Oh, this is getting very intiguing. :D
think I might know, but am very curious to find out who Eclipse's other creator is. |
 Carmilla DeWinter 2009-07-08 . chapter 11Well, this is sure some interesting developments. I have the horrible feeling that the plan will backfire in a way I'm not expecting yet (you're quite good at doing stuff here that I don't expect).
And Alexis' jealousy is a fascinating extra. |
 the idiot 2009-07-04 . chapter 11 Wow, normally I hate OCs, but I like Eclipse - she's got style {and is very sleek and sexy ;D).
OHMYGOD MEGGATRON! Uh oh, troubles comin', and I assume, the plot. I can't wait for the confrontation between mech and man! |