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Falling Right Side-Up
2009-10-24 . chapter 14
I love this fic. Kind of slow paced considering it's a remake of the movie, but still. Love it. Hope you update soon!
Teoryn
2009-09-26 . chapter 14
Okay, I really like this one as well. Very nice twist with Eclipse not being Skyfier's daughter. Only leaves Megatron...but then it could have been someone else. Very interesting indeed. I hope you haven't lost interest in this story and maybe work on it some more.

Wonderful story. (-:
gogogo!
2009-09-07 . chapter 14
come and update this piece! it's a great story don't abandon it just yet!~
Eliza Acheron
2009-08-02 . chapter 1
This is such a fantastic story- please update! :)
Shirox
2009-07-29 . chapter 14
I like this story very much and that there is Sky/Star pairing in it is a big plus :D It's interesting and well written, i hope to see more of it soon :)
cfox
2009-07-18 . chapter 14
Well that threw me for a loop . I think I know who the other creater is and what a shock . Her color should of been the tip off. Now off to read What Darkness Brings, to find out the scoop.

Please continue to update soon.

keep up the good work.
9aza
2009-07-14 . chapter 14
Whoa! Skyfire's not her creator?! Man, now I have to distract myself so my curiosity doesn't kill me. Great story by the way, it just keeps getting better and better.
Wol Lo
2009-07-13 . chapter 14
Massive update!! Yay!
Black Demon Cat
2009-07-13 . chapter 14
And the plot the thickenings.
KarKeys123
2009-07-13 . chapter 14
(Gasps)
Starfire201 (not signed in)
2009-07-13 . chapter 14
You know, after I reviewed that chapter where it was shown Starscream had a daughter, I realized something and reread the section, and the coloring at that point just struck me as odd for a sparkling between Skyfire and Starscream. Not wanting to spam, I didn't post another review to that chapter with that statement. I did get suspicious, however, and have some ideas of who the other creating party is. You are good at surprises, though, so I will not voice them here in case I am incorrect.

Liked how you handled the revelations of Starscream's identity to the Autobots as well. Nicely done. Enjoyed Sideswipe's getting thrown down the most. I suspect Starscream considered that long overdue payback.
Starfire201 (not signed in)
2009-07-13 . chapter 12
It's only been 2 weeks, and you were able to churn out 3 chapters during that time. I would hardly call that slow, but that is my opinion. Rather amusing the meeting between the Autobots and Sector Seven. Better than the movie one.
PhantasmBabeIvory
2009-07-13 . chapter 14
Oh, this is getting very intiguing. :D

think I might know, but am very curious to find out who Eclipse's other creator is.
Carmilla DeWinter
2009-07-08 . chapter 11
Well, this is sure some interesting developments. I have the horrible feeling that the plan will backfire in a way I'm not expecting yet (you're quite good at doing stuff here that I don't expect).

And Alexis' jealousy is a fascinating extra.
the idiot
2009-07-04 . chapter 11
Wow, normally I hate OCs, but I like Eclipse - she's got style {and is very sleek and sexy ;D).

OHMYGOD MEGGATRON! Uh oh, troubles comin', and I assume, the plot. I can't wait for the confrontation between mech and man!
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