It was interesting, I liked it. What happened aboard the ship was never really went into you just see Allelujah kill the one boy but we know there were more aboard the ship and he was covered in blood. I could see something like this being what happened to the others. Good work

Hallelujah, that was actually pretty good. Sure, you used way too many words that were the same (obviously hallelujah and sorry) but it's not necessarily a bad one-shot. Good job.

~Snuffie