Edward shirtless…sigh… Haha, sorry, I have a man-crush on Edward hahahah and love the end:) aw Edward cares so much for bella and she likes him to but why does jake have to be in the middle of this uggh he always gets in the middle

aw edward was gonna cry

that was good i loved edward standing up for bella and it was funny when edward had fun in his room:) and why did he go into tanya's room if he didnt want to uggh guys

bella&edward forever

love wat bella did to edward twice:)and i love her being with jacob but having phyical feelings about edward also i love edwards personality thinking he's a hot shot

I almost closed my eyes at the wonderful sensation as I answered breathlessly, “Yes?”

“You need to move, you’re blocking the lock,” he said, his tone once again normal and cool. hahhaha love that part:)

Update anytime soon?

This Rocks! you guys are totally amazing!1 Keep Goin :):)

My favorite line from this chapter: "I’d make him run his errands shirtless, and then pay a private investigator to tape it for me." LOL!

Finish the story babe!

I love this chapter! So sweet and cute!

Love this story - you guys are super talented

ha edward is getting treated like a little boy, lol!

OH OH, i know what worse than that, you know when parents say "im not angrey i'm just disapointed" then you feel guilty and you wish that were angery.(sorry had to be said! rofl!)

very very good keep writing

OME, everytime there is a twilight referces a high five myself.

Go you!

oh yeah! blue and white go the cats (footy).

what does PDA mean and if it obvious dont laugh, i'm a lil slow. :P