oh wow! I really like what you have so far. Daniel is really interesting, he's my favorite so far. As for Rem, she hasn't gotten much limelight, I wonder when we'll see more of her soon.
Chapter 8 was somewhat confusing, but in the end I understood. Please do update soon

while i'm really glad you updated, this chapter waas kinda confusing, ihope you update again soon, and that the next chapter makes more sense ;P

nice, please update soon!

A very well thought out chapter, i enjoyed reading it, and one more thing...

I'VE BEEN THROUGH THE DESERT ON A HORSE WITH NO NAME, IT FELT GOOD TO BE OUT OF THE RAIN!

Thats a good song! I was so surprised when I saw it!

Well, a good chapter, I look forward to reading more.

"For once, Daniel, could you please just listen to the scary men with guns?"

Funniest line I have read in a long time XDD.

It was a great chapter, I hope to read more relatively soon.

Grammar: 5$
A Decent Story: $1,0,0
This Chapter: Priceless.

I love your story! Your characters work very well together and I love the ballence of Humor and action! I really hope you continue it soon!

you know, i keep getting all exited everytime i see this fic gets updated, the sad thing is that its sad because i get exicted because it means the fic wasn't abandoned, well, part of the reason at least, long review short, please update soon!

"Oh my, aren't you a pretty handgun." I was down right cracking up when I read that.

Again another good chapter, while I felt it may have been just a little on the choppy side, I can't wait to read the next one!

Keep on writing!

wow this is quite crazy
i wonder how Vash could manage to miss his own daughter... but how could he be so clueless in the first place? surely he should have seen her as a toddler, since the pistol was passed on from him, or be able to recognize her in some way or another...
I really like the fact that Wolfwood Jr. doesn't take after his father in utilizing the cross, and is quite capable in his own way, but I was hoping that he'd take after the strength of his parents, since both of them are quite physically strong afterall (he couldn't handle the cross by himself?)
Also one more thing I'd like to ask:
What does the T in Rem's name and D in Tom's name stand for?

All in all, that was another enjoyable chapter

Thanks for the credit, you honestly didn't have to, it was a great chapter. My favorite so far.

Well, as for if the quote is mine, I believe it has had some previous inspiration, but the words might be my own. I don't want to officially claim it. As, as soon as I do, some book, in Europe, will be a best seller, use taht quote, and I am a plagiarist XD.

Well, enough of my rambling, great story!

yay! i'm so happy that you updated! i loved this chapter! the first part was really funny, please update really soon!

Clever as always.

this looks interesting, please update soon!

wow, hope your ok,... well atleast yor here now and updateing ^-^. but ok chapter, I was a bit cnfued at the time jump between the end of the last on and the start of this one, but thats ok.the action scenes were pretty good, I might be getting a small crush on Daniel, but eh, don't mind me. hope you can update soon.

good chapter. i really like this story, and I'm glad you aren't dead!