she's overreacting, though it's understandable.

That is soo CUTE!! 'Et the extraterestreil' cute.

Oh my goodness! I kno this is a dumb reason to review but I didn't expect this to have been published so early! 2009! Cool. AWSOME CHAPPTER!

I love all of the little details you put into the interaction between Marty and Amelia. It's perfect! Great job.

very nice

I love the story So far! great outline and it makes you want to find out what happens next! good work!

i love this. i was actually thinking of doing this with jennifer, but i kinda like this better. great job! :D

For those of you who asked me to do this: Part 2 is up

wo9w I love your story! It's one of the best fanfics I've ever read, you're an amazing author, keep up the great writing and I CANNOT wait for the sequel!

Can't wait for more! Can you post something here when you post the new story so I know about it? :)

Once again, a nicely written chapter for a very good story! I enjoyed it a lot. It's too bad Jennifer and Marty broke up, though. I was kind of hoping that you'd have Jennifer still be around when the DeLorean appeared, so that she would have to be taken along as well and she would be told about the time machine, so that she'd understand Marty and Amelia better. Then again, the last few sentences indicate that if that had happened, the changes to Jennifer in 2015 would've been no more, right?

Well, I'm looking forward to 'Broken' and Part II of this story. Update soon, if you can!

wow! i just have to say this is the best story i have ever read, ever! you have been able to capture the very essence of the characters in a way not seen for years. i was on the edge of my seat with every chapter. I especially loved the relationship between, of course, Marty and Amelia, how they kept trying not to give into their amorous feelings for each other until the very near end. And i also loved the way that you provided a new spin on the original film; makes me wonder what the movie would have been like if it was this way. I also can't help but wonder what will become of Jennifer(although reading this makes me want her to be out of the picture altogether, but that's just my opinion; a few others perhaps as well!) with Doc saying "something's gotta be done about Jennifer" in the year 2015. I simply cannot wait for the next installment in this(i hope)series. I will now end this feedback/praise by saying you have done a great job of breathing new life into Back To The Future, and I hope that you will continue to do so. Best of luck to you, My Reality Is Fiction, on all of your writings.


Sincerely yours, Joshua Gross A.K.A crazybttfFan22

That's a great ending to a great fic, even though it is kind of sad. I also like the twist on the ending.

I also like how you mentioned Marty's lopsided smile. I think it's so cute.

Well, I'm looking forward to reading Broken - as well as the second part of this story.

plzz say thats not the last chapter! :D i luv ur story! :D

Interesting chapter. I liked reading it, I really did. I'm looking forward to Part II!