Hey. Awesome story. I read it twice. You convinced me to be team jazz.

I LOVE THIS STORY OH PLEASE MAKE IT LONGER PLEASE (oh great i probably sound like a 5 year old now) PLEASE!

that was really good, soft, sweet, tender, just amaizing.

OK, this story was so sweet and innocent. I luv it <3!

Hey =)

can you just do some other stories like that?? That was pretty cool and I'd love to read more like this ;)

Jenny

omj!! it was so good ! can you do a couple more chapters please im begging you?

This was AWESOME!! Loved EVERY MINUTE!! your a very good writer and keep it up!

~Gabriella

omg. soo good. keep writing

nice job. i liked it.
Jasper is awesomer then edward. there i said it. alot of ppl hate me for it.
great idea :)

Holy Crap. That was so intense. Wow... I'm pretty speechless right now. That was unforgettable. Wonderful work!

LoveLove!
EJ 12212012

if you dont rite more im gonna hire a hit man to hit you. no joke. (hit=tokill mafia term)

:O
Kep Writing !
Its so god
but why would bella do that?!
She lovess edward
but who am i to critisize ?
(:

Aw... Is this a one-shot thing?
I like it.