 openwindow 2009-12-08 . chapter 2omg!
please update this! :D |
 phppsmss 2009-11-24 . chapter 2 UPDATE! I have been searching fics like that for quite some time now! |
 Arcellant 2009-10-04 . chapter 2I do hope you continue! |
 Leo's Katanas 2009-09-09 . chapter 2So cool!! Can't wait for more! |
 InkyKate 2009-07-14 . chapter 2 I know you are probably horribly busy with other and more important things (real life things, too)... but I do so wish you would continue this story.
It's hilarious and well done. The characters are spot on. And this last scene - where Saitou and Battousai find themselves suddenly dueling in the midst of a crowded shrine - makes me dissolve into giggles just thinking of it. Your writing is vivid enough that I can picture it all very clearly.
And I liked the line about marital harmony. I would be very interested to see what your Tokio is like.
That said: I've read several of your other stories and enjoyed them as well. You have talent, and I look forward to reading any further updates/postings you might make. |
 Lucrecia LeVrai 2009-06-07 . chapter 2Oh, I can see this has lots of potential. XD I really like similar stories (i.e. time travel) set in the RK universe, so I'm definitely looking forward for more! |
 Dreammaker Twilight 2009-05-20 . chapter 2This is an awesome story! You really can't compare it to Sirius13's story, the two of them are amazing in their own way! It looks like you've abandoned it, but even so, I beg of you: PLEASE continue it! xD |
 kenkao.inukags 2009-05-10 . chapter 2aw man this is gonna turn out to be awesome, you really should continue it! |
 TrisakAminawn 2009-03-30 . chapter 2Ah, that's pretty fun. I especially liked the bit with the drunk shinsengumi. Do post again. |
 The Wandering Pen 2009-01-23 . chapter 2This is getting way too fun. Keep up the good work! |
 reader 2009-01-21 . chapter 2 I enjoyed your update, especially the 'Saitou moments'.
It was neat to learn a bit about the current state of the wolf's family. |
 Shahar Mystral 2009-01-21 . chapter 2 Awesome story! I'm really enjoying the spin that you are putting on the time travel idea. As expected it is well written with the right combination of sorrow and humour. I eagerly await the next chapter. And as soon as allows me to login I will put this as a favourite. Keep up the great work |
 SirenAlpha 2009-01-21 . chapter 2Oh no. Not good. What's going to happen? Write more so I can know. You have two bakumatsu hitokiris running around fighting each other in the Meiji era in broad daylight. What could happen? |
 skenshingumi 2009-01-20 . chapter 2I liked that last line. Of course, Kenshin's in the thick of it. Isn't that one of the fun things about his character, always caught up in trouble? I enjoyed this although I wish we also got a peek at Meiji Kenshin and Saito responding to being back in the Bakumatsu. |
 SiriusFan13 2009-01-20 . chapter 2Oh! I like like this chapter better than the first. The humor was great. I love Kenshin's reason for leaving... bad memories for sure! I actually like that better than the "flashbacks" that I kept using in my fic. I think your idea works much better. Saito's refusal at sentimentality (poor kid... I hope he's okay) and his discomfort at the coughing were brilliant. As was his "sheathing" of the incense stick. Typical of Saito. Everything is a sword. This reads wonderfully. I am still easily picturing everything here, and thoroughly enjoying each and every scene. Keep up the good work!
I eagerly await more.
Sirius |