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Bianca
2009-10-12 . chapter 4
wow this story's awesome(can't wait for the next chapter^^)...I really think you should make the game Poker,because when Tyki plays Poker he feels more relaxed and comfortable.He's just like a...joker.Yeah,a joker!And Lavi will definitely loose^^.Loved your story,darling:*
oztan
2009-09-16 . chapter 4
what about Snap?
Dark-Kumineko
2009-08-15 . chapter 4
this is the BEST idea. to make Lavi a doll for Road it is totally within her character to do that. I LOVE your still or writing it's just-draws you in and make you want to read more.
please update
:)
9mm Kisses
2009-04-20 . chapter 1
I love the ending part lol Not knowing that Tyki's reaction being is actually kinda Ironic cause she seems to be hanging around him the most ^^

Ne, what language is the titles written in? It looks familiar, like Latin
random-shit
2009-04-14 . chapter 4
Really like it this far. Please update soon.
Voltairey
2009-04-10 . chapter 4
gah! why did fail to send me the update for this story?! i stared at the lucky archives for a good three minutes trying to remember if i had read four chapters of this story. for the love of nickles, that makes me upset!

uh, yeah, anywho, great update. poor lavi having to wear those clothes. it did give me lol but i do throughly enjoy lavi in his regular "teenage" clothes. and the fact he has to wear dress shoes makes me throw my heart out to him. i do enjoy my boots better than dress shoes as well (even though i think my heels suck more than his new shoes)

and as for a game...how about...*is actually thinking pretty hard* chess or checkers? sophisticated since i can't really see (okay i can, but it makes me laugh too hard) tyki playing a little kids game.

*grins* but now tyki has lavi alone...oh i am so waiting for this next chapter X3
Your-Frienemy
2009-04-06 . chapter 4
they should play strip poker... OwO

or, or, uhm.. Gay chicken (although that would be jumping right to it...)!
maybe they could play truth or dare ^^ -lol, head full of ideas-
Miyah
2009-04-05 . chapter 4
My inner fangirl would give a LOT to see them playing Twister XD hmhm. Tyki would have a lot of groping chances with that *coughs*
artemis89
2009-04-03 . chapter 4
it's not important if you are going to hate this chapter later, because i love it too much for think of your feeling.
i'm not kidding, i really like it.
yes, you have made me wait a lot, but you have repaid me entirely.
so thank you!
i love the part when Sheryl call Road and Tyki said to her that "i'll watch your 'doll' for you".
she reply "But if he acts up, just tell me and I’ll kill him myself when I get back”.
it made me laugh: i think this sentence was better if direct to Lavi, because is definitly Tyki that will 'acts up' with him.
and for the game i think Scrabble will be fun(even if Lavi is benefitted in it, because he's a Bookman). if they'll play something with cards or dice, Tyki will definitly cheat.
anyway i hope you're nor going to let me wait another month for the next. i'll die for to much suspence.
Fedishi
2009-04-03 . chapter 4
Hm... I don't know what game to suggest :/
*having a mind blank*
But OMG yes the dub D: it is so awful DX it kills me too D:
EVERYONE! Everyone except for Skin sounds so wrong D: and I don't even like him lol
It is scary to watch DX *hides*
But anywho, hehe Sheryl yey good timing my dear man! XD
Alone time again :3 yey
whatthehellwasithinkin
2009-04-02 . chapter 4
Perhaps Chess? They are in a war where everyone is a pawn so...Heh, awkward much? Poor Lavi must be getting more and more confused by the second.
whatthehellwasithinkin
2009-04-02 . chapter 3
Can't say I've actually seen the dub cast for the series. Yesh, we know they're going to eff uo with a bunch of voices (as usual)...that's why the subtitle version still exists and we adore it. Real genius idea of Lavi, let's attack the Noah that goes through anything! (Why of course that won't deal some damage to my pride and my body)Then again he was scared, so...It's fun :P
whatthehellwasithinkin
2009-04-02 . chapter 2
...Wow, I fell like a dolt, I didn't read the translation on the top. :P
Man, it would seriously suck to be suck with Rhoad liek that (and bad for physical and mental health)...Wonder what Tyki's expression was liek when Rhoad brought Lavi in.
whatthehellwasithinkin
2009-04-02 . chapter 1
Ineteresting how Rhoad can make anyone do her bidding. The chapter titlte, what language is it? I get it says something along the lines of "to keep or to kill?" right?
Maydn
2009-04-02 . chapter 4
Great chapter, much love!
Road is such a cruel possessive child, really. When she told Tyki she would kill her doll herself in case something happened, I could totally imagine her playful voice...
And for some reason I really liked that part where Lavi is so afraid of the black floor, and of falling.
I definitely loved your Tyki this time! His other "game" with Lavi has already started, hasn't it? And Lavi is so uncomfortable and yet without any options. Haha, "Guess not."! :))
So what could they play? I've got no creative suggestions...and I think Scrabble sounds like fun, especially with a future Bookman participating! Actually I learned about Candyland this instant... eh, it's a very young child's game? Well, seeing we're still in the alternate 19th century perhaps more "classical" games would be nice, too. Like chess, checkers, dice... (Haha, I know saying chess is like a negative creativity burst, but I wanted to say at least something, so please bear with me.)
Anyway I loved this! Looking forward to whatever game you let them play. And whatever else might happen :)
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