 Komander Kool 2009-05-19 . chapter 2Alto and Ranka getting married is unthinkable. Chapter 2, that's the way to go. Chapter 3 please... |
 gppr 2009-05-01 . chapter 2Where is the rest? This is so good, a continuation is a must!!
Please? :) |
 Fostersb 2009-04-26 . chapter 2I had totally forgotten about this story, but I love the concept. Please update this one ASAP. I also can't wait to get to month 9 of Sheryl's pregnancy in your other story. Poor Alto, he will not have any energy left:) |
 sakR9 2009-03-04 . chapter 2 Oh cool preception on it. That he hadn't met Sheryl before :D
Loved when they were drunk and giggling :D Wish I'd seen something like that in the anime ^_~
Continue this, please! |
 sakR9 2009-03-04 . chapter 1 Wo! Go Sheryl!!
So glad they didn't manage to properly get married, heh. Bai Ranka |
 yuikure 2009-02-02 . chapter 2Although the weeding scene (about Alto&Ranka) in the Chapter One made me almost crazy, I felt a little better after reading the great chapter two.
Wait for your updade!
Love AS forever. |
 Zer0JMB 2009-01-26 . chapter 2this is good, pleas continue. |
 redskyy 2009-01-23 . chapter 2This is definitely one of the best AUs I've seen so far. You capture everyone very well, creating a believable storyline with everyone in character. Alto and Sheryl's first meeting was very appropriate, which only adds to the big confrontation at the wedding. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
 .turtledork 2009-01-22 . chapter 2at the beginning, i wasn't really too sure about the setting of this story... it just didn't click with me especially with Alto's indecisiveness highlighted and even a hint of disloyalty >.< things like that, i tend to not like very much.
but, i have to say i enjoyed the second chapter despite everything :) I love alto and sheryl's interaction in the bar :) it was very "them". personally, i think you write an excellent sheryl
i also loved the fact that their drinks were called "firebombers" =)) epic stuff!
Of course, the writing is superb and well-done technically XD it's real easy to read and fun to read as well XD
i'm looking forward to how this would go on! :) |
 grieverlion 2009-01-21 . chapter 1HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA GREAT!! keep at it!! |
 Evanette chan 2009-01-21 . chapter 2For god's sake, this story is AMAZING! Update!! I love it! Gosh, I was too carried out to the story! Wow!! You sure have talents!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! So Sheryl is pregnant? Wow |