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Reviews for: What too much vodka can do
Komander Kool
2009-05-19 . chapter 2
Alto and Ranka getting married is unthinkable. Chapter 2, that's the way to go. Chapter 3 please...
gppr
2009-05-01 . chapter 2
Where is the rest? This is so good, a continuation is a must!!
Please? :)
Fostersb
2009-04-26 . chapter 2
I had totally forgotten about this story, but I love the concept. Please update this one ASAP. I also can't wait to get to month 9 of Sheryl's pregnancy in your other story. Poor Alto, he will not have any energy left:)
sakR9
2009-03-04 . chapter 2
Oh cool preception on it. That he hadn't met Sheryl before :D

Loved when they were drunk and giggling :D Wish I'd seen something like that in the anime ^_~

Continue this, please!
sakR9
2009-03-04 . chapter 1
Wo! Go Sheryl!!

So glad they didn't manage to properly get married, heh. Bai Ranka
yuikure
2009-02-02 . chapter 2
Although the weeding scene (about Alto&Ranka) in the Chapter One made me almost crazy, I felt a little better after reading the great chapter two.
Wait for your updade!

Love AS forever.
Zer0JMB
2009-01-26 . chapter 2
this is good, pleas continue.
redskyy
2009-01-23 . chapter 2
This is definitely one of the best AUs I've seen so far. You capture everyone very well, creating a believable storyline with everyone in character. Alto and Sheryl's first meeting was very appropriate, which only adds to the big confrontation at the wedding. I can't wait for the next chapter.
.turtledork
2009-01-22 . chapter 2
at the beginning, i wasn't really too sure about the setting of this story... it just didn't click with me especially with Alto's indecisiveness highlighted and even a hint of disloyalty >.< things like that, i tend to not like very much.

but, i have to say i enjoyed the second chapter despite everything :) I love alto and sheryl's interaction in the bar :) it was very "them". personally, i think you write an excellent sheryl

i also loved the fact that their drinks were called "firebombers" =)) epic stuff!

Of course, the writing is superb and well-done technically XD it's real easy to read and fun to read as well XD

i'm looking forward to how this would go on! :)
grieverlion
2009-01-21 . chapter 1
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA GREAT!! keep at it!!
Evanette chan
2009-01-21 . chapter 2
For god's sake, this story is AMAZING! Update!! I love it! Gosh, I was too carried out to the story! Wow!! You sure have talents!! Can't wait for the next chapter!! So Sheryl is pregnant? Wow
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