Please please please make another chapter soon i love this story so much

Despite rather.. glaring holes in Kushina's reason for absence, and muted reaction upon coming back (the tears make it more acceptable/believable however... to an extent) ... Anyway, despite that, I actually rather like this story as well, though once again it's a shame to see the updating stop. It would be nice to see this continued. On another track, the Kyuubi dieing and the "body kekei genkai" are rather clever, though unfortunately (for you, anyway.. I think..) this interesting aspect only raises the desire for more updates.

yeah!please update!

Oh... Gettinv interesting! This is only the third NaruTen story I've read, but it's shaping up quite nicely.

This is really good I can't wait for the update.

That's a fairly cool story, and that kekkai genkai is certainly awesome.

hey really good story like hoe u have tenten and naruto interacting cant wait for next chapter.

Keep going!

great

Hey, this is really enjoyable :)
Can't wait for the next chapter

David Shigure

Awesome chapter update soon.

o ya I think the next chapter is gona be god Keep up the go job.

Great chapter, though a bit short. Quite the cliff hanger for sure. Can't wait to see how this fight plays out and how naruto does eventually learning the new suiton jutsu. Cheers!

dude great chapter

hey friend, good, chapter, please make the next one soon, will naruto figure out his feelings for tenten soon, i hope so. peace out