beautiful! How sad! I feel so badly for Miyuki, though...

this is so like them very good job and it was pretty sad but thats what makes the story true

I didn't understand something actually. you referred to Miyuki as an astrologer when that would be someone studying the stars for the zodiacs. If you meant the stars and planets in general, than it would be astronomer. Though if what you meant was astrologer, than that's perfectly fine too. just sayin because I'm usually used as a editor for others' writing.