VERY NICE! This fic kept me enthralled to the very end! Absolutely LOVED the ending!

This story is awesome! I love how you wrote Raditz, and I adored the flashbacks scattered across the story. I have to say, I can actually see Raditz doing exactly what you described at the end, leaving the base after smuggling two killer kittens into it. :) Thank you for writing such an excellent story! I hope you decide to write more for the DBZ fandom!

Fantastic story, truly inspirational. You really add depth the DB universe.

Naughty Raditz... *cackles evilly*

I had read this story in your site a while ago in you r original site... still like it very much.

The only strange point to me is how Radditz could kill the big cat and keep the cubs with him in the pod, especially this last task. Injured and sick as he was, how could he deal with the two little beasts? Even being a Saiyan, that sounds a bit hard to eat.

Love the ending! I was expecting something like that when he saw them, and you didn't say they were kittens. But, he taught them to understand him and destroy bases? Wow... You should write a sequal with him going back for them... Or just hearing the news about another destroyed base!

The writing through this is consitantly clear and enjoyable. :) I really loved reading this, and I'm not normally a sci-fi fan.

It's fun to read about this character, I like how your story both shows what we already know about him, and expands on that. He was a minor character originally, but the way you write him makes sense, is believable. Storywise, I loved all the details, how you described the consequences of Raditz' injuries, and the whole political/ cultural reality for this character, how events have affected him, how he's treated by other characters. The ending especially is made of win. Kudos and cookies!

That was so cool! I lived it! Espically Raditz's revenge. Take THAT, pretty boy! Mwahahahahahaha! Anyway, cool story.

I originally read this story back on your website. I loved it then and I love it now!

Thank goodness I was finally able to find a link back to it. Your means of writing have always been a pleasure to read. Thanks so much. You've been an impiration for me. Sorry didn't mean to ramble on there...

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Awesome story.Way to go.

Holy Kami-sama!

That.

Was.

Truly.

A.

Wonderful.

Fic.

*Dies*

I had flashbacks from all those Sience Ficton films I usualy watch while reading this fic! I mean, thay shuld make a movie based on this! If I know Holywood, it would be one of those B-movies, But that woud not mather, cause "Nunk Rats" would be in it! Wo! (I shuld realy lay of those cafferine inlaced fizzy drinks.-_-)

That was way to cool. Now, the real question is, why haven't I heard of Van Vogt, argh. Oh well.

Later

Never get a Saiyan mad. Look at what happened to Frieza, Piccolo Daimou, Frieza, King Cold, Cooler, Cell, the Androids, Dr Weelo, and that fool Dyarmin learned that. Of course, they learned that the hardest way and paid the ultimate price: their lives. This is a work of art. Please bring more stories about Raditz to FF.net.

I really liked this. Radditz is great in this story. I'm glad for him. I loved the ending!

Wow! That was long, cool, and very, very good for a one shot! *giggles*