It's well writen, and absolutely funny! :D
I say you should continue it!

This was just... so silly. But I loved it.

"You are dead and thus have no brain waves." LOL
that and "potatoes are too Irish" definitely made my day

MORE PLEASE!

Really, it was great! so hilarious!

I love this story! Your imagery and use of words is superb! I can't wait until you update!

I love it. I love it deeply when Young Walter and Alucard, especially with Arthur around, have conversations like these.
The Fanfic is funny, long and well written, although some minor grammar errors were to be found along the way.
As for the Fanfic itself.. Walter is actually talking a bit different in canon, more like a Teenager, but this version is nice and interesting too.

To put it in one word, Continue! ^^

It's wonderful, to put it simply. Thank you very much for such a refined and good humored piece. Please continue...