Meh, purists and traditionalists. Don't listen to them. Well written. Far too sappy-angsty for my tastes, but well done in handling the subject matter.

I don't mean to be rude, but have you read, watched or heard of He-Man and She-Ra. Adam and Adora are not, have never been, or ever be in love. As for Swiftwind and Battle Cat please watch the last episode of She-Ra season two "Swiftwind's Baby" to see how...um...unusual a storie you have written.

Okaayy...I'm not sure how to respond to this story.