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vacfrog
2009-12-02 . chapter 59
You almost forget some characters exist when you don't see them for a while. Well here is a villain if you want to use him.

Name: Lenny Xestus

Age: 24

Gender: Male

Position: Enemy pirate, Captain of the Lying Fake Pirates

Race: Sabre-toothed blenny fishman

Weapon: Tekagi and nekote on both hands, fukibari, and several kaiken hidden in his sleeves.

Attacks: When he calls an attack he will usually do a different action
Blenny Bite: bites
Blenny Spit: spits fukibari
Blenny Claw: attacks with Tekagi and nekote
Blenny Stab: stabs with kaiken
Blenny Spear: throws kaiken

Physical Appearance: 6ft. tall, very skinny, white skin with a black stripe across his chin and nose and a yellow stripe running across his forehead, he has short spiked black hair with yellow tips, needle sharp teeth, and yellow eyes. He wears a sleeveless white hawaiian shirt with black leaves, cargo shorts, and sandals. Has a small silver hoop in his left ear a leather belt around his forearm and gold anklets around both his ankles. Has UNTRUTH tattooed across his chest.

History: From an early age he learned he had a gift for lying but people started getting fed up with his constant lying so they kicked him out of the village. When this happened he learned that piracy was the perfect job for his talents, so he joined a crew and lied his way right into the captains shoes, renaming them the Lying Fake Pirates.

Personality: He is an extremely compulsive liar he sometimes forgets he is lying, occasionally if he says he has some ability he becomes shocked when he cannot perform it. Acts very smug and snide until things stop going his way, then he becomes frightened and nervous. Will use any dirty trick he can think of to win he has no conscience about doing anything.

Likes: Lying, bluffing, exaggerating, lying by omission, fabrication, fibbing, contextual lies, and the color white

Dislikes: The truth, Marines, and bananas... especially bananas

Dream: To keep doing what he's doing.

Other: Wanted poster name "Lying Lenny".
Sails in a Marine ship flying a marine flag until they get close to a target then they raise their Jolly Roger (a grinning skull with narrowed eyes with lie written on the forehead).
Alter Shead
2009-12-02 . chapter 59
ALl in all, you've managed to pull off an amazing plot so far. Soo many have been revealed, and you've managed to rise new mysteries, such as this "Fairy Godmother", or these new famous crews and captains.

Seriously, sorry I havent been able to review, heck, I havent even managed to work on my own fic. xD

But seriously, great job and keep it going.
Sparkling-nexis137
2009-12-01 . chapter 59
O, I can't wait to see the interactions of all these new characters, although Harvey seems to be a major freak. (No offense. I just don't like cannibals tosemi-cannibals, but that might just be my like of Maria talking.)

OH, that's such a hard decision! I just can't seem to choose. I'm always up for seeing a ew crew member, but then there's the romance. TOO HARD! (I guess I vote crew if I'm forced to choose. ^^)
Dthehalfdragon
2009-11-29 . chapter 59
Nice chapter. I cant wait to see the next one. As for the choice I say new crew member.
Kisdota-The Freak Gamer
2009-11-29 . chapter 59
CAN'T YOU JUST DO BOTH OF THOSE ARC IDEAS IN THE SAME ARC? I MEAN, THE TWO OFFICIALLY GETTING TOGETHER SEEMS LIKE SOMETHING THAT WOULD TAKE ONLY HALF A PAGE. IF NOT I WANT THE NEW CREW GUY TO JOIN, AND THANKS FOR THE HIGH BOUNTY ON OMEGA, AND YOU PUT IN RICKMAN AND SAKURA TOO, THANKS, HOW LONG TILL THEY MEET THE CREW? I REALLY WANT TO SEE THAT, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

I GOT A NEW GUY FOR YOU, VILLAN OR GOOD GUY DOWHATEVER YOU WANT, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA

Name: Leon Arashi (Beast of the Forest)

Age: 23

Gender: Male

Specialty/Position: Fighter, tracker

Race: Human

Devil Fruit/Weapon/Attacks: Zoan Cat Cat Fruit, Lion model. Read Physical Description to see what his forms look like. His appetite has turned into one a wild beast would eat, and his sense of smell surpasses dogs.

In his Half Mode he’s able to move his body quickly. His strength becomes superhuman like and his claws are able to leave marks in steal attacks

Lion Paw: A powerful palm trust, strong enough to shatter boulders.

Lion Slice: A strong swipe of his claws that can slice’s through four times. It can leave a claw shaped mark in anything.

Dande-Lion: A cross attack using both clawed hands, cuts through with eight slices. Can leave a crisscross cut in anything.

Full Lion: His speed and strength increase, and his teeth become strong enough to bite into steel.

Lion Fang: A Lions bite that can chomp through stone and clamp up cannons.

Lion’s Fury: Leon bites and claws at a pinned down enemy violently.

Lion’s Call: An ear shattering roar that’s loud enough to shatter glass.

Physical Appearance: 5.8 feet tall, very dark blue shaggy hair. Light green eyes, and a very muscular body build. No Shirt (they always rip for him). Long cut up black jeans with holes at the knees, no shoes walks barefoot.

Half mode: Body becomes slightly furry with blue fur, stands on two legs. His face grows a dark blue mane around his face and has two fangs that grow out of his mouth, his hands and feet remain human shaped but grow long claws at the tips.

Full mode: A regular looking lion but four times as large as big as a small car, with a Dark blue mane with regular blue fur.

History: He lived the first ten years of his life alone with his father. The two would travel from island to island researching nature wherever they went. One day there was an accident, while exploring a large island with a thick forest he and his father were attacked by a pack of native large wolves. Leon got away but his father wasn’t so lucky, the largest wolf and leader of the pack had gotten to him, and Leon was forced to run away to a nearby village. Leon was forced to grow up alone with no one, he was angry at the wolf that attacked his father and wanted to get revenge against the animals that killed his father.

For the next Ten year Leon began working out, and practicing fighting. One day when he was 20 he came across the Cat Cat Fruit gave him his powers and decided to go out and find the pack of wolves that killed his father. When he found that pack of wolves that killed his father he began rampaging towards the large group. The pack tried to take him down but he tossed them all aside with ease. Many of the wolves and other animals began to stand back out of fear and wouldn’t even get near him, when he saw the same wolf that had killed his father he was amazed at what he found. The Wolf was older and bigger, and he saw that it had a mate and a pack of wolf cubs with him. He wanted to kill the father wolf, but when it stood in front of him despite being afraid he couldn’t bring himself to attack.

After a week in wallowing in disappointment the forest near the village he was living in was being attacked. A bunch of pirates were burning the forest down and he went to stop them. When he got there the pack of wolves he had attacked before were being terrorized by the pirates, Leon began to fight the small group of pirates. The large wolf that he had wanted to kill was about to be killed by the captain of the pirates, but Leon killed the man in his full Lion form and was able to drive away all the pirates.

Ever since then all the wolves of the forest began to follow him and made him leader of their pack.
Leon and the pack of wolves live at the top of a small mountain in a very huge cave that has a passing water stream. Leon has been helping anyone who gets lost in the forest and fighting anyone who would harm the trees or animals.

Personality: He seems intimidating and silent at times to any strangers, though in reality he’s really shy to any strangers. To his friends he acts proud and serious, though still friendly and kind.

Likes: Meat (raw or otherwise), trees, high places

Dislikes: Hunters and poachers, ignorant campers, stuffy rooms

Dream: See other nature areas

Other: He’s lived with the wolves for such a long time that he’s learned to speak to any other animals.

Four or five times a year he’ll go to the nearby village and kidnap any young woman he likes in the village for a day and return them back in a day or two. He does this mostly for company. He doesn’t harm the women in any way, but so far all the ladies he’s kidnapped either yell too loudly or cower in fear of him. The village used to panic about this but now they know that it’s nothing to fear and do nothing.
Nezumimaru
2009-11-29 . chapter 59
Meh, I say you start with the KC/Krystal idea, just to get it out of the way. Also, the Night Fight Pirates were mentioned last chapter, and their captain was mentioned this chapter. Will we be seeing more of them, or is this all they will get? either way, I'm fine!
LaZy-RaIn-DaNcEr
2009-11-29 . chapter 59
Awesome chapter! Now the whole crew has a bounty how cool! I love seeing all the different point of views I was wondering how Ken and his crew were doing looks like he's doing pretty well haha X ) Ooh we even get to see a little of Zugai's dad even if he's hidden in the shadow lol And of course I always have fun reading about Morte and his crew X P As for the next arc I gotta admit I'm really want to see about the new crew member so that's my vote but I'm won't be upset if you do the KC and Krystal being a couple thing X D

Keep up the good work!! Update Soon Please!! ^_^
SeeNoEvil121
2009-11-29 . chapter 59
Holy cow! That was definitely a lot! So Coby's an Admiral :Well deserved! What about Helmeppo? And 61 Million for Chris's first is pretty good I'd have to say :D That's a hell of a flashback though - all these people!

Reading Ken's name on the list in the beginning, I was like: WOAH! I forgot about that guy for a minute there! Good to see he's got a crew going still and all of them are doing good :3 And you've brought in the Blue Lightning Pirates! Great job with Lance and Nikolai, their characterization is perfect!

We finally meet (briefly) Zugai's father! About time! Even though he WAS hiding in the shadows... but that's ok! We have a name!

And Nampu is ok! Good! Gah, there's so much going in in this chapter!

What?! KC and Krystal are supposed to be together!? Lol jk jk. But I think that it's about time they become a couple. As much as I'd like to see a new crewmember, I think this deserves a spot first. It has seniority, lol.

Can't wait to see the decision! see ya next time!
KCSonic113
2009-11-29 . chapter 59
I'm sorry I haven't reviewed in a while: Stuff's been going on. But you're doing an awesome job! As for the next arc, supries me. =P
Sparkling-nexis137
2009-11-23 . chapter 58
AWESOME!! I can't believe all these people we've meet turned out to be family members. It was extremely skillful of you to weave them in so cleverly along the way. X3

O, this mysterious Fairy Godmother sounds fun. If she's in the New World, she must be strong. I can't wait to meet her, and the rest of the family who we don;t know about. ^^
Firefx56
2009-11-22 . chapter 58
Name:“Light Burst” Hiroto Shohei

Age:15

Gender: Male

Specialty/Position :Scout

Race: Human


Devil Fruit/Weapons/ Attacks: The Hadou Hadou no mi (The Surge Surge Fruit)
The Hadou Hadou no mi is a Paramecia type fruit. It allows Hiroto to store an enormous amount of energy and burn it whenever he wants. He can transfer this energy to body parts, weapons, or other people in order to give them incredible speed, strength, and durability, relative to the energy spent.(e.g, sending energy to legs in order to move at superhuman speeds and deliver devastating kicks). However, the power is limited by the amount of fuel he has in his body, like fat or sodium, so he eats an incredible amount of food in order to fuel his ability. He also wields a long staff that he transfers energy into for it to never break and deliver devastating blows.

Attacks:

Hadou Hadou Charge: Hiroto’s basic move with his fruit, as he coverts an amount of fuel to energy and transfers it to a body part which needs extra strength, speed, or toughness.

Hadou Hadou Hurricane: Hiroto sends a large amount of energy to his legs and spins so fast, winds rotate around him and gust in a direction. This is not very damaging, as it only makes wind, but it can be used for other purposes besides battle, such as sending wind into the sails of a ship

Hadou Hadou Typhoon: A much stronger version of the Hurricane, but leaves Hiroto exhausted. The wind is so powerful it sends enemies flying.

Hadou Hadou Burst: Hiroto sends energy to his legs, giving him a speed boost, then quickly approaches his opponent and pummels him with a round of blows. His signature move.




Tornado Fist: Hiroko sends an extreme amount of energy to his right arm. He begins to rotate it at hyper-speeds, and then sends an earth-shattering punch, with the rotation giving it drill-like qualities,

Ball Lightning: Hiroko curls up into a ball, sends energy all over his body to make it more durable and stronger, then rolls around at super-speed.

Hadou Hadou Lightning Charge: Hiroto burns all the remaining energy in his body, giving him extreme capabilities for 3 minutes, but he is knocked unconscious afterwards.

Hadou Hadou Transfer: Hiroto transfers energy to another person or to a weapon

Earthsunder: Hiroto sends energy to his the tip of his staff, jumps up, and slams it either into the ground or onto someone, doing tremendous damage.

Physical Appearance: He is pretty tall, around 5'8 or 5'9, and despite the colossal amount of food he eats, he is thinner then a rail, due to his powers. He has longish(for a guy) black hair and light brown, tired eyes. He wears a large black hoodie with a grey T-shirt underneath and long blue shorts.

History: Hiroto was born on a small isle in south blue. He lived with his father there. One day, when he was ten, a mysterious man in a marine jacket sailed to the lonely island and accusing his father of being a retired pirate with a bounty of 96,0,0, attacked him. In the ensuing battle, he found that his father had been a powerful pirate, but it ended with the marine bounty hunter killing his father and blasting Hiroto straight of the island with a mysterious logia type fruit. He landed miles away in the ocean, and barely alive, swam to a wreaked old raft with a fruit on it. Starving, he ate the fruit, but then found it was a devil fruit, so he had no choice but to wait on the raft until it floated to a nearby island. Once there, he began traveling from island to island, honing his skills and searching for the killer, as well as trying to become a pirate in memory of his father.

Personality: Hiroto is a calm guy. He almost never laughs, and rarely smiles. He is fairly quiet, but always speaks his mind, no matter what he’s thinking. He is generally helpful, but has a slight mean streak. When in battle, his personality changes. He seems to be much happier, smiling and laughing a lot easier, as well as occasionally making quips about his opponent. However, he freaks out when ever he sees the marine’s justice symbol, as a result of his childhood trauma. He can’t fight, and literally curls into ball and whimpers.

Likes: Fighting, quiet people, pretty scenery
Dislikes: Loud people, marines

Dream: To follow in his fathers footsteps, and to kill the marine bounty hunter and avenge his father
Dthehalfdragon
2009-11-21 . chapter 58
nice chapter. I cant wait to see the next one.
LaZy-RaIn-DaNcEr
2009-11-21 . chapter 58
Great chapter! I'm glad the crew is being so nice to Haze : ) Hmm so now we learn more about the family council interesting. We got some pretty interesting bad guys to worry about too X P And now etels has joined the group that guy is so mysterious I wonder what his real agenda is. I can't wait to see what happens next!

Keep up the good work! Update Soon Please!! ^_^
SeeNoEvil121
2009-11-21 . chapter 58
:D New chapter! AWesomeness, so we got to meet the Family, cool! I was hoping for that :D. That scientist guy is creepy though >.> and Etels joined the family??

It was interesting to see something other then the Cross Skull Pirates for this one. Can't wait to see what you've got planned next!
Kisdota-The Freak Gamer
2009-11-21 . chapter 58
BAYA BAYABAYABAYABAYABAYA, I THINK YOU FORGOT TO SAY WHO OWNS WHO NOW, SO WHEN ARE YOU GONNA UPDATE YOUR MOVIES VERSION OF THIS FIC? OR DID I FORGET TO ALERT IT? ANYWAY NICE CHAPTER, YAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA
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