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justagirl8225 1/16/09 . chapter 4
I'm pretty sure I still have my position as the head of the "I hate Jessie Orton fanclub" .. evil woman.
auerlia 1/16/09 . chapter 4
jessica is a bitch love this story plz update soon.
foreverafan15 1/15/09 . chapter 3
oh my gosh tht chick better be careful she's bad right lol

can't wait til the next chapter...

nana...:)
justagirl8225 1/15/09 . chapter 3
love this part for John's antics, still, lol.
Heel Princess 1/15/09 . chapter 3
oh no what is that hussey doing...

loved the john and lita bits, god i love them so lol

"You want to go on a Cena safari and have an adventure with the one eyed trouser snake?” that was my fav part, and i loved the little cheek kiss...too cute. But this is about randy...wake up and smell the roses Randal! lol

loving it :)
auerlia 1/15/09 . chapter 3
jessica hates lita love this story plz update soon. jess knows randy likes lita and doesn't want them close together.
TJ Sparkles 1/15/09 . chapter 2
All right, something fishy is definitely up with the surrogacy thing. I didn't really think much of it until I went back and re-read the first chapter, and that is just WAY too much money for a surrogate, even though Randy does have a lot of money. It's just very suspicious.

I'm probably wrong (I usually am), but I can't shake the feeling that Randy's being scammed. At the very least, something's up with his wife. I don't know what it is, but the very last line of the chapter made me think that she's up to something.

Great job with this chapter, and even though you ended it on a cliffhanger, I'll forgive you because I love the story. LOL. I can't wait to see what you come up with in the next chapter.

Tina
auerlia 1/14/09 . chapter 2
love this story plz update soon.
Heel Princess 1/14/09 . chapter 2
gasp that bitch lol... randy so has feelings for my favorite red head, sigh isnt love grand lol. cant wait until one or both of them relaise that, and that his wifes a liaf :) loving it hunn
TJ Sparkles 1/13/09 . chapter 1
I honestly don't know how you keep coming up with all these awesome story ideas, but I'm certainly not complaining! This is another one that I think I'll like, and of course you know I had to add it to my alerts list! (I think I have at least 50 stories on my alert list, LOL, but that's not a bad thing)

I wanna know what went on between Randy and Lita in the past. I'm getting the feeling that they had a relationship, and it seems to have ended amicably, but I'm curious to see how and why it went downhill.

Would it be weird of me to say that you wrote John in such a way that I wanted to smack him, along with Lita? LOL. Most of the stories I've read about him portray him as the nice guy, but I think that this is probably closer to what he's really like. Great job with that, he's not the easiest to write sometimes.

"Is she hot?”

He'd SO say that, LOL.

"This woman is going to be the kid’s natural mother and Orton going to be the father. At least one of them has to have looks.”

This coming from a man who looks like an ape?

Anyway. I really enjoyed it, And, and I'm looking forward to more! This is great :)

Tina
Heel Princess 1/13/09 . chapter 1
ADDICITED ALREADY lol lita/randy and lita/cena are love, even if thats not where this is going i enjoyy both very much...lol. that is a whole lot of cash...excited to see where this wonderfulness is going :)
auerlia 1/13/09 . chapter 1
AW love this story plz update soon.
justagirl8225 1/13/09 . chapter 1
yay *dances for joy* :D I am so happy that you decided to post this here
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