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Twilight Solstice
2010-01-03 . chapter 2
That was so completely awesome! Hilarious! XD
Twin A 07
2009-12-24 . chapter 2
I just died... seriously, I died... And I died laughing. OMG! This was so fricking hilarious! I'm adding it to the faves! As for the next chapter, I want to see Minato and Naruto and the Day Care. SEPERATION ANXIETY! Up-date soon please!
Hello
2009-12-08 . chapter 2
This is a real good story. I don't care what next in the story line. But keep your writing style the same. Keep up the good work
counter-intuitive
2009-12-06 . chapter 2
How about 2 and 3 together? Minato leaves Naruto at daycare and sulks all day, and when he goes to pick Naru-chan up he gets jealous of his new-found friend who I think should be Sasuke! Haha xD I love the idea of Minato vs Sasuke :P
Shinichi06
2009-11-30 . chapter 2
I liked ideas 2 or 3!
Please do update!
A.C.Y.P.
2009-11-21 . chapter 2
Idea # 2 or # 3 sounds good. I don't really want to know something about diapers yet, in written detail LOL. But that's your choice. It'll be funny either way. And Minato suffers.
I can picture him doing the demure maiden look = =. And from the anime, his voice seriously doesn't match it. ROFL.
A.C.Y.P.
2009-11-21 . chapter 1
The first chapter was hilarious!
'Ninja-swiveling action' bwaha, love the names...
Minato has become a little touched in the head it seems but Naruto seems to be freakishly used to it. How cut. ^^
And Life Savers is adorable. ^_^
Thanks for the read!
Taliath
2009-10-19 . chapter 2
Funny stuff. Keep it up.
justanotherguyathiscomputer
2009-10-17 . chapter 2
As funny as the first...hehehe oh hell go with all three! make a huge chapter with all three!! that is the only way to go!! go big or go home as they say!!



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Meinos Kaen
2009-10-12 . chapter 2
I'd like to see either Diaper Duty or and a New Friend, so that we can see more of little Naru. :P
rianifitria
2009-10-11 . chapter 2
I'm so glad I read this before I go to school. It definitely brighten up my day.
creepy crab
2009-09-30 . chapter 2
i'd like to read no. 2.
update soon, i really enjoy your crack.
minyaka14
2009-09-19 . chapter 2
love the story please update soon
anonymous
2009-09-06 . chapter 2
XD update!
lol this story is hilarious
and I just the last option; the friend should be Gai-sensei! haha
musicinabottle
2009-09-03 . chapter 1
Ah...so, story done. Now: reviews!

It was REALLY funny and I mean it. Extremely so. I'm still not exactly sure what "ninja-swiveling action" is, but even without knowing, it's hysterical.

And so: I urge you to keep writing. I can find no faults with your writing and I want you to update as soon as you can to broadcast to us humble readers your humorous results.

Remember: we laugh WITH you, not AT you! xD

I think you should stay strictly in the Naruto fandom, a lot of readers might be turned away by the entrance of Inuyasha. But that's just what I think.

Anyway, update as soon as you can, I am loving this story!
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