Great job.

this is so freakin beautiful! you're such a poet!

I kinda like this one better than the other. Its more...idk but its more smething XP
Random

God, I loved this. I think I've read it a million times and can't get enough. It flows really well..and I can't even think of words! Awesome job!

I like this. I like how it all just flows together. Well done. Although, I do have to point out that somewhere (I'm too lazy to find it myself, sorry) you didn't capitalize the s in Sam.

I still can't get over how great this story is! Great job girl!