omg! this has got to be the most awsome fic i have read in a long time! seriously! u dont happen to be a fan of terry pratchett do u? i think you would really like his discworld series! ur style is very similer to his.

looks like it could be a good fic hope you update it.

nice me likey!

i like your style

of writing your not

a boring narrator like

some. you put some humor

into serous times but no

when to keep them serous.

yes yes you are now update . . . ready set go

Ryand'r as in Starfire's older brother Ryand'r? That would be cool. Even if not the story is cool so fare.

Awesome start, the end was very well written. Ah1 I want to find out who the person is! D:

Also, even tho it was only a little thing, I like the bit when he morphed beast to find the white thing.

Please continue! 619!

Mimi x