Let me say this. I adore this story. I adore your characters, your dialogue, your original characters, your plot, your pacing, your...everything. I've been a fan of chrono trigger for most of my life, and this is the first true masterpiece of a retelling I've ever read. I certainly hope you didn't give up on it because of the lack of reviews; I'll review twice on every chapter and three times on Sunday if it gets you back in the game! You have a read gem here, and I hope it isn't going to go unfinished.

She should'nt have done that and Reiz is tottaly messed up. Explanations are needed...like in 'big time' status as Robo would call it.

Robo: "Are you feeling well Author? You appeared to have done two boss fights which you usually decline though I am not complaining:

Tetra: Robo I wholy agree with you. I still want an explanation of the record player in 600AD please and of Reiz?

Robo: "Yes indeed. I want to know about that too"

Robo: "Correction Author: According to my calculations the doors to Magu's lair were not locked."

Tetraforce: Thank you Robo for pointing that out to the author. Are you done so I can review?

Robo: "certinaly."

Good chapter though I am sad that Marle isn't going to Frog to hug him. :( Oh well.

LOL. Marle should make her own hug theropy place to make people happy.

Don't say that! I promise you Crono and Marle aren't about to be killed anytime soo- ...

You know what? Don't be in the downy dumps or Marle's going to have to come hug you.

But, no, happy endings all around.

Fifi?

Stupid Lavos, it destroyed all the sweet water for the cave people. How are they supposed to get through the ice age without booze.

You know, i have a bad feeling that all the people in the antiquity are going to try and kill crono and the gang. I can see Marle or crono on a stake to be burned.

Poor god of war, he can't use his full power to fight back because their not strong enough, and when they are strong enough he's still going to get hit.

How many lollies did marle buy?

Poor future girl

Ah, yes, the halfway point of the game! I loved this particular segment... made a helluva good transition to novel format, too, I think. It may not be as conventional as some people might expect, but I've always had a lot of fun with the way we dealt with things. Keep up the good work, love, things are pulling together great.

Me thinks the cat has snapped.

And ew, Reiz is bleeding all over the place

Me thinks that the cat is not trying to destroy lavos.

Well, that's an interesting way of giveing Ayla her cat tail thing...? yeah...

You have to wonder, does everyone speak the same language in Chrono Trigger, i mean 65 million years and they speak the same language. Seriously

All I will say is that you need to make Marle's drunkess be more realistic kay?

Ugh If it weren't for the translator at Chrono Compendium I would've NEVER understood what those chapters mean. Ayla: "Makes head go boom!"

Good chapter by the way and I like this time-warp problem thingy though you missed ALL the boss fights. :(

Looks like we have the depressed duo on board which they n-e-e-d to work on their attitudes no?. :(

Geez they are even making me depressed. X: *Gets happy from Marle's famous hug* :D

.1... WE! THANK YOU MARLE! YOUR DA BEST! Lucca: "I thought I waz the best! I'm Lucca The Great! *Insert Luccas's Fanfare here* Marle gives Lucca a nasty death glare and Tetra says. "Your all the greatest!"

*But Lucca throws a brick at Marle though she has Tetra's hard hat on* O:) Marle: *giggles* Thank you for saving me your so sweet.*

Hah! Very funny chapter, the OCs in this story are actually quite well done, and while funny I'm glad that Marle is no longer trying to act like she's black. On the subject of Marle I do like how you've done her character with being nearly permanently cheerful yet still willing to kick anybodies ass who pisses her off and how she acted while drunk was hilarious. Beyond that I do like the dialog given to the non speaking member of the game and I am glad that there is a budding Crono/Marle relationship starting up. Looking forward to more! Keep up the good work!

-Ja ne

I can't wait for Crono to see his last spell. A dome of destructive lighting energy. Or maybe raise, though he does focus on sword moves, cleave, and frenzy.

Hmm, so many intresting characters. I can only assume that the 'sister' is the queen from antiquaty. And Magus' sister is the one in crono's dream.