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O.O

o...kay...

it was

interesting?

i liked the plot in the beginning...

i think you should have continued that instead of suddenly adding alcohol...

just some constructive critizism lol

*chuckles* what you got against total, eh? although, i must say, that was pretty dang funny.

Darn it. You pawned me in Rootlessdream's contest. Good job. I liked the end where Total comes up. I give you ten points for that.

Hmm. I wasn't expecting them to be drunk...That was an interesting twist. Hmm. Somewhat dark. But I like it! I have to say that I was a bit confused by the Total thing. And it was a bit random, all in all. But a fun read and pretty well written.

Nadia