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Graffigraphy
2009-08-29 . chapter 1
XD very amusing
EvilFuzzy9
2009-04-26 . chapter 1
That was beautiful! And I think we all know that Nanao has dreams like that.
drumgirl1923
2009-04-14 . chapter 1
hahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahahaha
Atemu'sLotus
2009-02-19 . chapter 1
Yum... Chocolate Fondue... :)

That was unexpected and delightful. ;p Poor Nanao...

Thanks for writing!
-x-nabby-x-
2009-02-17 . chapter 1
This was a great story :D loved it :D especially the end with the addition to the list... Hehe :)
JenovaJuice97
2009-01-22 . chapter 1
*smiles* very sexy
one problem...Nanao had picked up the last strawberry but then shunsui walked in and picked up another one...
megami kitty
2009-01-19 . chapter 1
omg! naughty, naughty nanao-chan! ^-^ i was suckered into thinking it was shunsui who was dreaming the whole thing but lo and behold it was the straight-laced fukutaicho of the 8th. lol. ^-^
KyourakuZelda
2009-01-16 . chapter 1
I LOL'D. Hard. I enjoyed it. Thoroughly. Very interesting sequel you've done a great job! Checking my emails I got your reply, after sending you one back I just had to read this sequel. Of course, I kinda hoping that it was Shunsui dreaming he was being seduced. OR, for Shunsui fanservice you could've had HIM sucking on the chocolate covered fruit rather than Nanao. You probably would've had ME reacting the way Shunsui was in the fic. lol! xD Overall great job and may you come up with a Shunsui-fanserviced fanfic someday. My birthday is coming up January 19th, perhaps a birthday present would be appreciated. >8D
darkchocol8807
2009-01-16 . chapter 1
i like it! it's adorable! she's so cute!

DarkC
enchanted-legend
2009-01-15 . chapter 1
oh.my.god
that was sexy! I was all whoa! then I read that line about the alarm clock and I thought you sneaky evil person *grins* thats just evil, poor Nanao and poor me.
We both want to know how it ends ^^
would love if you kept going with Nanao having all these dreams then just going crazy on Shunsui ^^ would be hilarious

anyway good work!
Capiorcorpus
2009-01-14 . chapter 1
Nanao has a naughty naughty mind, =]
Pheonocia
2009-01-14 . chapter 1
I love it, you're such a tease~ You're a great writer~ Wish I could write my stories like that, but my friends say I still have way too much descriptions... I respectfully disagree
Brighit Hijikata
2009-01-14 . chapter 1
You are a tease, really! You always do smt like this i.i U should do smt not so teasing!
Azuvala Assantri
2009-01-14 . chapter 1
Ahahahahaha! That was AMAZING!
Your plot twists are perfect, perfection at its greatest.
I love how at the end, you naturally wonder whether it's Shunsui or Nanao. ;P

Great job, this was really lovely. XD
I'llxBexUrxEnigma2010
2009-01-14 . chapter 1
aw...lol...Nanao is such a devious little lieutenant! I liked it. ^_^
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