Reviews for Betrayal - FanFiction.Net

Reviews For: Betrayal - Reviews: Page 1 of 2

Julianakun 2007-07-04 ch 1,	abuseI luved it! You should become a writer one day!
Teh Little One 2007-04-29 ch 1,	abuseI effin luff this story, i've read it like 5 times now!! teh cuteness!! I luff Judas...he's teh cuteness and it is SO obvious that he effin luff Jesus. Teh kiss did last quite a bit and Jesus did seem to respond to it mwhahahaha!! cute! Yeah Jerome Pradon was teh smex!! and...yeah I'd love to read about Jesus and Judas meeting as children. Ta.
mirya00 2007-01-22 ch 1,	abuseOh-my-God. This was absolutely _too good_. I don't know what to say. I've read other JesusJudas fanfiction too, but I must say that you rock. Argh, I can't think. This was lovely. Almost made me cry in some parts ^^ . And what's really good is that this was so long. Yeah. Maybe I'll come someday and do a prpoper rewiew. Just now I'm too shocked by the brilliance of this story. Keep going like this!
in-search-of-silence 2006-05-06 ch 1,	abuseNo, you were not the only one noticing that. i was watching it in school , music class and stopped myself from blurting "It was like that in the bible?!" And yes, Jesus does put his hand around Judas neck. And it looks like Glenn did it unintentionally because a few seconds later, he takes it down as if he just realized what he was doing. Great story btw. ;D
mildetryth 2006-03-12 ch 1,	abuseIt isn't just you, Jerome is! By-the-by, wonderful story :-) did you notice that too? I was watching with friends, and they didn't believe me when I said that! They had to watch that scene again before they wanted to believe me!
MTarrant 2004-06-12 ch 1,	abuseOMG I love this story! I'm so glad you added all that extra Judas stuff at the end, with him helping Jesus through the pain and all. sniff tear Wonderful work.
Andi de Tarauger 2004-05-20 ch 1,	abuseThis story ROCKS. It perfectly embodies a lot of what I feel JCS is about...including some of the slashiness...it's amazing, and def. going on my favourite stories. Good job ^^ P.S. Personally, I prefer Tony Vincent to Jerome Pradon...absolutely AMAZING Simon, I'm DYING to see him as Judas on Broadway...but to each her own, I suppose ;D
BekkahJane 2004-04-10 ch 1,	abusebounces around. Hiya, read it, loved it, want more! I'm not gonna nit pick with the spelling of Pontius Pilate's name... someone probably already has. As I read your story, I had the soundtrack continually going through my head. You weaved song and non song text together wonderfully. It was amazing for me to be able to slip easily into the whole, sing.. don't sing... thing that I had going on while reading. It was a beautifully constructed story. One I will probably read over and over and over again. Also, No. You weren't the only one who thought the kiss lasted just a lettle bit longer then it should have. I also noticed in the film, when Annas and Caiaphas told Judas to stay and watch him bleed, as Jesus walked past Judas, his hand rested briefly on Judas' chest... lingering almost. I think THAT exact moment, tipped me there was a whole heap of subtext going on. And nope, Judas (Jerome Pradon)is in that Sexiest Man Alive category... In that red leather jacket and those leather pants? "scuse me while I drool.. Great story! Bek
Olivia 2003-12-26 ch 1, anon.	abuseGod, you know how to make a girl cry! Your story was beautiful, perfect. It touched me deeper than the movie did. And yea, Jesus and Judas (in the recent movie) are extremely slashy. And pretty. :) I would love to read how they met!
rola 2003-11-01 ch 1, anon.	abuseYou are amazing. And quite right, Jerome Pradon is incredibly sexy. Which is odd because he's balding and has a kind of pshycotic serial killer look to him. But he's hot all the same
Mecca 2003-09-30 ch 1, anon.	abuse::sniffle:: Very well done.
Katarik 2003-05-18 ch 1,	abuseNo, you weren't the only one. This movie is about the slashiest Biblical (well, sorta Biblical) movie I've ever seen, and the main reason I went lookig for Jesus/Judas was because of that movie. He is the sexiest. There's a website you might like called I Will Make You Proud, run by Britwitch about Jerome Pradon. The URL is http://w.geocities.com/britwitch_1/
Viktoria 2002-09-16 ch 1,	abusethis was SO LONG- but it eeas worth it. I cried varias times throughout this story. I cant explain it- but I was deepley touched.
Broadwaypoetess 2002-09-02 ch 1, anon.	abuseI'm staring to write how Mary and Jesus met, then I was going to have a spin-off from that how Judas and Jesus first met, but you can go first. Judas: I'm not gay. Broadwaypoetess: Yes, dear. Just keep telling yourself that. Judas: But -- Broadwaypoetess: You can't deny it forever, Judas. Judas: I'm not even bi! Broadwaypoetess: Just say what's in your heart. (A pause) Judas: I'm not gay!
Broadwaypoetess 2002-08-30 ch 1,	abuse"I hate him, that pompous *! His pale face and cold eyes, I hate him! The bald priest with his pale skin and snake like eyes was smiling, he knew what I had done had he was glad I was in pain." I began to like Annas, but, whatever. It was good. I remember reading somewhere that Mary Magdalene was a symbol in JCS. There was something about her being the mother, sister, and lover figure. Also, I know you entered in that you were not religious by any means, well, I just want to comment that Joseph died before Jesus started his public ministry. (I went to a Catholic School, I was brainwashed) Yes, Jerome is VERY sexy. I also saw some photos of Tony Vincent (Simon Zealotes in the video) as Judas. Very SEXY! Ack, I guess that's all. I liked the mild slash, it wasn't overly homosexual. One thing, I'm more partial to MaryJudas and Mary*Jesus. Anyway, bottom line, GREAT!!

Return to Top