Sweet story! I really liked the subtlty in their relationship. And I loved this line"There was that unmentioned need for each other that they both felt but neither had to say." Thanks for sharing! D

Aww this was very cute and heart warming!:

I really liked this one.

i love this 8 out of 4

Very nicely written fanfic. I love the way you describe Hei and Yin's thoughts. 3

I thought that this was well written too. I loved your take on post-anime Hei and Yin's life together and working together too. I love how in tune they are to each other's thoughts and feelings, but at the same time they seem to come to life by just being in each other's presence since that whole stuff that happened at the end of the anime. Its like Hei and Yin have gone under some transformation and they are still transforming, its like somehow through their ordeal contractor/doll they've come to find their humanity again, the things that make life worth living. But I love how they are living the moments and embracing them but at the same time embracing it together. I love how Yin is trying to understand the concept of love and being in love with Hei. I also love how doting and caring and how taken Hei is with Yin. So cute.

AW! This was so cute! Gya! It makes me want to hug a child, and I hate children! XD

Very well written! Faved!-Spel

nicely written! I LOVE IT! .

YINxHEI rules!

omigawd! I really like Darker than black and this pair; YinXHei...! Your fic was great! woot! -going to favs
Ja ne!
Hope to read more of YinXHei fic of yours in the future!

I always thought that Kirsi (i like calling her that. Yin doesn't suit her) and Hei were a good pair. exept for the fact that Hei is a bit too old for her... but still! they look good for each other. keep writing!

aww very cute:]

that was really nice!

i'm moved!

I really liked the fic , but i have a question. is it Pai or Bai(cause wikipedia says its 'Pai'). anyways, good job!

This is really good! I have a question, I just finish the anime and I was wondering did he give up being a contractor to be human or was he human from before?

Was it strange putting K for your rating? lol

I like the sadness in the story of how its written. It works really well and I like how you wrote the relationship between the two of them.
Having it be anything more would have ruined it. It speaks deeper than silly ole lemons. Hooray!