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ohremy
2009-12-08 . chapter 10
Aw, I knew they'd kiss. I love these two together. :)

I like the way that kissing Kathy confuses and comforts Jack at the same time. I think that there are a lot of situations in life that you can't feel just one way about, and I like that it's important enough for him to feel a few different things about it.

I love Steve - he's such a nerd, and so much so that he's really charming and endearing.

I love the line about how the school would have Jack and Kathy married by lunch - god, that brings back middle school memories, lol. I'm not sure that *that's* a good thing, but it's absolutely true to life.

And I can JUST see the three of them in the principle's office, lol! Too funny.
Anaeli
2009-12-06 . chapter 10
hey!!

sorry i didn't review immidiately my computer got stolen! so i had no way of reading it!! IT IS AWESOME!!

keep writing and please update soon!
OhFancy
2009-12-06 . chapter 10
Thank you!Thank you!Thank you!Thank you!Thank you!
MagnusSpark
2009-12-05 . chapter 10
Excuse me, Kathy? Hey, this is Mariel, Jack's girlfriend. Hi. Hands off my man, yeah?
Lol I'm commenting as I read...
He's confused at why he cheated on me...yeah I would faint too. =P
Marshmallow is a sexy word. Especially in a certain someones voice..LAWL. No Kathy..don't knee him there. >=]
POKEMON! Oh Kathy you are my hero.
Hmm I guess Jack's talking about the good vibrations. Ahem. >=D
JACK'S BUTT IS SINGING. Awesome quotes here...
Aw I like Thursdays. KILL THAT TWAT JACK! You just crossed the line, buddy. D=
The waitress was ME! MWA HA.


Woah. I get wayy to into this story. =l
I'm done. =]
Ghostwriter
2009-12-05 . chapter 10
But Jackie's so kissable! Awesome job. Keep it up. Catch ya on the flip side.
Mymz
2009-12-05 . chapter 10
Great Chapter!! I love the relationship between Jack and Kathy :)
pyscho-pyro-shrink
2009-12-04 . chapter 10
yes! i was going to be so disappointed if they didn't kiss. great chapter!
mfalcon
2009-12-04 . chapter 10
YAY! Awesome kissing scene.

"If this is a dream, please let me sleep forever." Triple swoon! =D

"Pokémon! Gotta catch ‘em all!" BA HA HA HA HA. Hilarious.

Great chapter. I loved the second part that explained the kiss from Jack's POV. As always, looking forward to the next chapter. =)
Lazy
2009-12-04 . chapter 10
when i saw the end of last chapter, i was like 'ho shit. she did NOT just do that. those two are never gonna swap spit.' and then this little diddy came and i was super excited to know what would happen. so yeah. they got their little kiss, it was interrupted, and by Pokemon no less.
Gilligan
2009-12-04 . chapter 10
That was so perfect I don't even know what to write.

And as soon as I read the A/N the first thing I thought was "she WAS going to push him off the building" lol.

Loved it!
Billie DaGoat
2009-12-04 . chapter 10
I love your story. keep it up
Fairy Skull
2009-12-04 . chapter 10
Loved this chapter it was just awesome, Can't wait for more!
AJ2951
2009-12-04 . chapter 10
Aw :) see I knew you'd make them kiss, you had to :p it was perfect!

I love these two together so much, I think I say that about every day huh lol

That whole pokemon song idea was awesome haha, that sure does make a person pick up I guess :p I like Steve, he seems cool and I like the idea of Jack having a good friend like that growing up.

The whole part about him kissing Kathy feeling as right as walking into the Mercer house and strumming that guitar was just so perfect and awesome :) aw!

AND THEY MISSED EACH OTHER! :) aw again :p

I love how these little flashbacks and present day parts flow into each other :)

THANK YOU so much for writing this!
Luzith
2009-12-04 . chapter 10
:)
WrithingInkling
2009-12-04 . chapter 10
Aw *melts* Lovely chapter. :)
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