Yay! I finished this story, and there's already a new one waiting! I'm happy you did stop this one with the end of the shakedown and didn't drag it through an entire Replicator war... That's a story I would love to read, but it would be off-topic and I'd never be able to find and re-read it later! :) Great writing! Now, on to "The Foundling"!

Great story! I can't wait for the continuation!

An excellent read like always! Looking forward to seeing the next installment.

I nice short and sweet story, I enjoyed all the way through!

I was surprised when "The End" came up, but you're right it was a good place to end it. So, the new story will be up tomorrow? :-)

Great job. Thanks.

YEAH! They saved her good! Or Carson would kill them!

What a very awesome story this was!

0_O! Some of those Asgard really are getting pissy!

Very good writing! You got that scene (which we knew was coming from Talon, but who'd've guessed it'd come from McKay?!) written without making it awkward, long, or unnecessarily tear-jerking. So, do we get to kick Replicator butt now? :)

Good chapter!

Great chapter!

Great! Melony's all out of that clear gel and done heaving and healing (almost, anyway). Now, can we please kick some replicator butt? LOL

PS: Thanks for spelling "breath" right! It drives me nuts when "breath" and "breathe" get mixed up!

Yay! She's up! Great chapter!

As expected, great read!

Thanks for the update. Have always enjoyed reading your stories.