Whoa! That was really...really...hot. The description of him was just the way I would imagine him being in this scenario...

...I don't usually read things like this, but...wow. O.O 3

oh jeez wow
hot and sad at the end
very well written
good job :)

LxMisora is only my third favorite pairing in Death Note, but you depict their relationship perfectly :)
I liked it a lot; especially the explanation why L is so impassive. It really fits him.

Both of these were hot. And gorgeous. And such satisfying reads. Thanks! :)

Aw. I liked it :3

This story is beautiful. It's not everyday I see a piece like that...that was amazing! I love it!

wow..*_* seriously I loved the first part of it but the second even more. Because everything sounded so true! (And it was both, cute and sad..) Just..wow.. :)

What is the difference between Lemons and Limes? Are Limes more bitter, or descriptive, Where Lemons are less descriptive? Or is it the oposite? Great story anyway!

That was bitter.

But very interesting to read.

I think you did a very good job keeping them IC...

Your fics truly are indescribable. I am at a loss for meaningful words to tell you what I thought of this.

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I like the distinction between Japanese and English langauges. It's interesting to ponder.

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This was pure goodness. You did an excellent job. Adding to my favorites!

I...cant describe how i feel about this story. its not enough to say that i love it, not enough to say that it peeked my interest, not enough to say that had L and Misora down to a T.

Its a great story and i hope you make another one that has to do with this specific story.

I was so happy when I found this. The LxNaomi pairing is so rare...sadly. It's one of my favourites. This was very well written, and the characterization was brilliant. You managed to write a sex fic without it seeming too smutty. LOL. Well done.