wow, this story is captivating. O_O

you're a good author you know, lol. you adapt well xD

but anyway, I love the way u write. waiting for the next update...however long it may be...-hint hint- ;]

OED.

This is fantastic start, and a much needed, I think, glimpse into the pre-Twilight characters of both Esme and Carlisle.

"And so for the second time in my life, I was selfish."

...This really struck me. It accentuates the drive behind Carlisle creating another vampire and also accentuates his previous austerity. Well written!

This is great. I can't wait to read the rest of it.

brava brava update soon please

I love Carlisle/Esme stories! Keep going!