 Mrs.Riza Mustang 2009-11-16 . chapter 16Loved it! Can't wait for the nextchapter1 |
 Scherherazade 2009-10-28 . chapter 16Overall a good chapter. How come he's hiding in her closet? Why does no one kick him out? Who brain washed him? When will he wake up? |
 Flamegirl5500 2009-07-22 . chapter 15I like this story so far and I am looking forward to the next chapter to see what will happen next. |
 Scherherazade 2009-07-18 . chapter 15Well I started reading this again where I left off. What's the deal with Amon? He did this in the anime too. He helps Robin then hunts her, then protects her again. Amon, make up your mind. |
 Scherherazade 2009-06-15 . chapter 11Not a bad idea but it departs from the original a little too much for me. |