Gorgeous! Simply gorgeous! I found myself shrieking 'aw' every two lines! Keep up the good work!

Oh that was beautiful! I love how the story was told from different people & perspectves, and you describe things so beautifully :)

So glad Ryou had the courage in the end too! Good luck in the contest :)

This is a really cute story. I'm happy it gave Ryou the courage to call Seto and see him so he could have his happy ending.

Cute! Cute! I really liked Ryou's reluctance in this story and the imaginative way it was spun, weaving in and out of reality and ultimately pushing Ryou to take hold of his future. I enjoyed it very much!

Good Luck in the contest!

This was a great story. I love how all the characters have or get their happily ever after, and how the tone and mood of the story differs from who is telling it.

I'm quite fond of this pairing, myself.

I also liked the lines between fiction and no-fiction, physical and not.

Commi