I likes this fic a lots!

This is really confusing.. But I still like the fic, even though I feel like I'm reading several fics at the same time... (Sweatdrops)
The most confusing thing for me is the timeline, maybe you could fix that please?

A little confusing but I think I get most of it. You mentioned a clone. Is Alecki the clone? Or is Cat the clone? Or are they both clones? If it's Cat, is he a clone of Harry since Harry was dreaming as him then (I think?)?

oh my god i am evenmore confused tah before whats all this about clones and whate xactly is harry and james and whats it to do with hunters and all that

so edward hada love and lost her
and whatexactly was newton planning on doign to harry why deos he ahte him so much and when will bella stop being so naive and annoying

I like this story a lot. It is very unique. Though I do have a question: It seems like that Harry is part of the Hunters. Is that true?

Cloning ay...well...isn't that interesting. And yes...you are a nut. Ha ha ha
Macaday me a nut (and you're one too!...obviously)

I am so confused! You have my interest, and your fanfic certainly seems like nothing I've read before, but I'm still waiting for it to make sense. You're a skilled writer, please continue with your story. I'm interested to see where it goes, maybe it'll start making sense to me later on. Hopefully.

ok... i started this and completly reread it... but im completly confused... I get whats happening with harry from coming to his dad and going to school... all that stuff... but the rest has thrown me off... what's going on?

Oh... mysterious. ;]

This story started off well. It was clear, flowed well, and had a relatively well laid-out, systematic plot. After the first chapter, however, it went downhill fast. Chapter 3 was by far the worst. Since when is it acceptable to publish/post utterly incomprehensible stories? (I hesitate to label it 'drivel'. However, it came close). After the second chapter I had hoped that the story would improve. It did not. I will not be reading future posts since, by all appearances, it will be a waste of time. Yet, since the first chapter did ensnare me, I recognize that you have the ability to improve drastically. Please, for the rest of your readers, a) create (or maybe reconsider?) a cohesive plot, b) follow said plot and thus avoid confusion, c) stop assuming the readers will magically know what you mean and start including more context to your plot/setting shifts, d) consider taking more time to set the groundwork for the future direction of the story, and finally, e) connect with a good beta who will keep your stories comprehensible.
It is obvious from your numerous p.o.v. and time shifts that you're going somewhere with this story. However, please remember that you're only 3 chapters into your tale. It's okay to spend a little more time laying a comprehensive groundwork for your main characters before whipping out the conflict. I can fully appreciate your desire to create a little mystery and suspense. I would simply recommend choosing a different avenue to do this. Right now, you've created so much mystery that these almost-tangents seem completely unconnected to the story. I feel like I'm reading 3 or four different stories at once, with more being added every chapter.
The simplest way I can see you adding detail, while maintaining the mystery and suspense you seem to desire, is to devote a chapter to the 'other side' of this story at an appropriate time (emphasis on 'appropriate'). The chapter doesn't have to be long. In fact, the more concise yet well-written it is, the higher the suspense can be built. By doing this, you'll also give yourself the opportunity to flesh out (add detail like names, hint at how they tie into the main plotline, etc) your story's most evil antagonists.
*Sigh* ...Somehow my simple 'this story confused me to no end' turned into a little more. I hope, in turn, that my review makes sense to you and will offer some help! I think you have great promise. You simply need to deeply consider how you wish to present this story.

ok...i'm confused but i'm loving this fic and really can't wait to read more. please update soon.

moonlitorion (",)

This is a great story! I can't wait to see what happens next!!

Interesting, though I am wondering who is Harry's lover going to be... I truly hope that we don't have to wait until the sequel! But hopefully you might answer this little question, Is Harry going to be paired with a male or a female?

I hate that! it's "Lo odio!" in italian; Odio che is I hate that...
Like... I hate that room, that in italian becomes: Odio quella stanza.

other than that, it's great!