So lovely and wonderful. I loved it and all it's cotton-candiness.

Pink and Fluffy,
Errin xx

Aww, such a perfect Alice/jasper moment! I love it!

the sad part is is that we do say ya'll. a lot.
lol, i loved loved loved the story! and the emphasis on Jasper's accent!

So good!
I love it!
Great job!

This guy is a God. It should be illegal for him to be so hot. Great work.

Aw, this stotry was so amazing and sweet and beautiful! Great job! Go Jalice!
Oh, somewhere in the story, you mentioned 'twilight', you capitilized the 'T', but didn't have to (I always automatically do that too)