nice so far! oh, no! poor Jazz! is she gonna be alright?! shes not actually dead, is she?! i hope not!
anyway, please continue and update soon!

Amazing first chapter!! it was really interesting...and angsty. XD
NOO!! What happened to Jazz??! you are evil!! >O<
hahahaha update soon and take care :)

I really like this story. Please continue! I can't wait to see what happends!