this was cool! but seriously can u say jealous on byakuya's part and da man does know da art of seduction

heartbreaking... :'(

Oh, god! This is so good, so heartbreaking, so, so, so...Perfect, in every sense. And in character...

I wish you wrote a sequel...

It was painfully beautiful. I wish I could read some more of them, but I think it's perfect as it is.

So painful. Poor Byakuya, you can really feel/understand his uncertainty about Renji's feelings (even though he totally adores his captain zomg) and his jealousy toward Ichigo is an interesting addition. The end is wrenching. Great job! :)

that was one big ouchie... Great plot though... and poor poor Byakuya...

Oh, dear. So sad! Beautifully written, too. You did a lovely job portraying the characters, especially Byakuya’s feelings/thoughts.

It's so sad yet great. I feel like crying now. So sad...

Great job on pinning their personalities. Love it.

aw this is so sad, write more!

Well **... Jus about had me weeping. Very nicely done. The last few lines or so were amazing. Very sad and slightly bitter and so longing, you could almost feel it. I loved this.

Oh my god! I loved this! Seriously, I'm all teary eyed and everthing :D Thanks for sharing.

awe...
T^T

Wow, that was amazing. So beautifully written. It was really interesting to see Byakuya pining for Renji. It's usually the other way around. You did a lovely job portraying the characters and Byakuya's feelings.

Saw this link through LJ.

This was so beautiful. And so...sad. Wow, great job. Even though you haven't written in this fandom for a while now, I think you have the characterizations spot on. Good work...definitely going into my favs.

~ASK

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So sad... and so Byakuya-like. I liked how you made Byakuya a little shy, it was like showing a bit of his real self that's hidden under the noble mask. Good job!

*gives cookies*