All in all it seems okay :)

Good chapter.

Woohoo and hoorah. Oh it is well written and very interesting. Oh yes I liked this fanfic

Good chapter. Continue soon.

hmm, a bit on the short side, but interesting so far.

When you mean Darkstalker tournament you ment the first Darkstalkers game right? Any way, keep up the good work!

This story sounds interesting enough, continue soon.