Beautiful ending.I'm glad that Brooke ended up with Mouth something that I wished would happen on the show but sadly never did.I loved that NP baby name and they're going to have the most beautiful babies ever.

Possibly nice idea. I am going to stop reading after this because you made Haley a **. There were a changes int hte way you were writing; such as changing between "Nathan" and "Me" in places. Over all, what I read was good but not that sort of thing I would read. All the best for any further writing.

Perfect ending to a perfect love story. I think Peyton's line, "It's like someone took the deck and reshuffled it so that everything was right" summed up everything I loved about this story. It started out complicated, was filled with angst, heartache and drama, and ended with true love.

I love that Nathan and Peyton had a beautiful beach wedding just steps away from a place that held so many memories for them, with all the people they love most in the world, and that their beautful daughter made her presence known on such a special day.

Life is how it's supposed to be and the people who are meant to be together, are beginning new chapters in their lives, but retaining old relationships, just in a different way.

Anna Camille Scott. What a beautiful name! I loved the paragraph detailing her birth and that Nathan, Peyton and their daughter were surrounded by their family.

Outstanding story. I hope you continue to write more Pathan stories because you do such a wonderful job. Thanks for sharing!

I loved this chapter, smuttiness and all. It was all about two parents-to-be living with food cravings, ramped up sex drives, wishes for their child mixed with all the great Pathan stuff we already love; their playfulness, their love for one another and of course their desire for one another.

You did a fantastic job of combining all those elements.

Aww great ending to a great story. Everybody got their happy ending. I loved Peyton's line about this is what happy feels like. And Nathan was right all along that the baby was a girl. And I loved the part where Larry and Whitey were looking at Anna Camille and happy she was named after the women they loved.

I really enjoyed this story and look forward to whenever you come back to OTH.

This was a great story and i'm going to miss it. You are a wonderful writer and I hope to read more from you soon. :D

aww i loved it!
i loved the way you ended it! iam glad to see everyone is ok with everyone now!
cant wait to see what else you write:)

Great ending. Everyone was with who they wanted to be with.

Loved the last chapter. Such a great summary of everything. I actually really loved that you didn't make it all about the baby - you made it all about Nathan and Peyton. The wedding was really sweet, and I liked that you tied up all the loose ends and everyone got the closure they needed.
Loved this story. Really great! Can't wait to see what you write next, whenever that might be.

Hahaha, I have no idea why Nathan loves the second trimester so much. LOL. D@mn that was hott! And I love the locker room bit. Definitely not a boring married couple. And it's so cute that Nate finds her even more beautiful six months pregnant.

I laughed at the pregnancy cravings. Ice cream, pizza and bacon. Great combo. LOL. I can just picture Nathan's face as she asks for all these crazy things. Great chapter!

Another great chapter! I loved the way Nathan didn't beat around the bush, just came out and said what he needed to say. Deb's reaction was my favorite. It's totally realistic that she'd be offended at missing both of her only child's weddings. But I loved when she changed her tune when Peyton told her they were going to have the traditional wedding as well.

Larry's reaction was pretty good too. Can't have him freaking out too. LOL. I loved the part before that when he could see some of Anna in Peyton, even though they weren't mother/daughter by blood. And I had to crack up when Deb noticed how Dan wasn't surprised about the news. I pictured that scene in my head and just laughed. LOL.

I liked the ending too, with Dan and Deb, because I actually like Deb in this story even though I'm not a fan of hers on the show. I'm glad Dan doesn't feel guilty about keeping Nate's secret and that Deb isn't holding it against him either. I can just imagine how much fun her and Brooke are going to have planning this wedding. LOL.

I love NP as couple and I liked this story.I look forward for upcoming chapters :)

great ud...it's nice seeing just some pure NP goodness! and how they're just having fun and being totally happy together. Always love that!!

Keep up the great work! UD SOON! :)

aww, i loved it!
peyton and nathan are so cute!
update soon!!

they are so cute! ud sooN!